Meh. this is so far averagely good but the main idea of this makes me roll my eyes There are just too many fallout fanfics where the main hero lost his or her memory. It's an overrated concept.

6676627 I'm basing it off of someone's play through of fallout four, so I can't change too many major plot points that they come up with for their game. Really, it's just a vary basic transition from them to me, and I'm mostly just mineing for ideas and coming up with a real plot, but that us a big part of how their doing their game, and what the character thinks he's a barbarian. The way I explain that might need some work though

6678015 I was thinking of doing them eposodily, in terms of about a chapter per episode of the play-through I'm basing it on. But in the future I don't doubt I'll condence some into one chapter or something. It's just the first chapter or so, not much their but introductions.

6678015 I can't like this comment enough

6680652 :p I'll look into it, I just intended for this to be a lot less work then PP

Impressive original idea, daddy-o. But I ain't digging the way your story lacks proper description.

Settings should be a bit more polished. And Swordmare, if she is going to be a wicked good warrior, needs good perception. I suggest making her percieve her surroundings in full detail when shit hits the fan.

I enjoyed the idea of a barbarian that was more clever than booksmart. And I can't wait to enjoy some talking, heavy-accented Dogmeat.

I'll be watching.

6723616 :p I'll think about it, since I had been writing it as a companion to somone's playthrough of fallout 4 but I'm not alowed to watch that atm anymroe