Why do I get the impression that this story and Daring Do's current situation aren't the only times that she's run into Jua and gotten on her bad side?
Old age definitely can get to anyone... am loving this so far and damn the fact that it never told me that the story updated! Aw well, still am loving this anyway!
Twilight: Hey! How come I never found this before!?
Twilight, this was lost in time, you couldn't find it because it was never found at all...
I still don't understand the connection between Mhalifu and Ahuizotl. Is there some sort of reference that I'm missing, or is it simply unexplained in the story?
Packer insisted that it would be improper for me to make the journey without an adult and.....a...... representative of Baltimare University. However, Professor Underhill insisted that he could not spare the unicorn. They got into quite a quarrel, but that stopped when Bluebell stepped forward. I remember her words clearly. They were strong, defiant and utterly bewildering to me. “You aren’t sending Daring Do home without sending me too.” Bluebell stood with me. And a moment later, to my even greater shock, Fleetwing did as well.
Some awesome action this chapter.
Why do I get the impression that this story and Daring Do's current situation aren't the only times that she's run into Jua and gotten on her bad side?
Well damn! That's a helluva thing that there cliff hanger is.
Ooooo, interesting~ Hahaha, nice job on this!
This is starting to get a bit more... interesting~
Nice job once again!
Old age definitely can get to anyone... am loving this so far and damn the fact that it never told me that the story updated! Aw well, still am loving this anyway!
Twilight: Hey! How come I never found this before!?
Twilight, this was lost in time, you couldn't find it because it was never found at all...
I'm not certain what that apostrophe is used for.
I still don't understand the connection between Mhalifu and Ahuizotl. Is there some sort of reference that I'm missing, or is it simply unexplained in the story?
6742169 Plural possesive? Apostrophe for a Posessive ending in s?
6742169 7722386 Just a typo that I thought I had fixed a long time ago. Must not have hit "save" after editing. Thanks for catching it.