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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
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proposed.
my
re-enter
mega spells Make sure to add spaces when its plural.
start up " - " Doesn't go in between "start up".
loose
thing Remove the " is " so that the sentence flows properly.
facility
10 mm Make sure in the future to add a space in between the number and measurement system type.
hollow
hint
Overall I am pleasantly pleased with your story . There are a few errors, but these can be remedied by putting your story in to Microsoft word or google docs and then using the spell check tool. Otherwise, this has the makings of an exceptional fan fic. If you would like someone to pre-read your work and/or check for spelling errors before you post, i would be willing to proof read your work(pm for my Skype account if this is what you wish to do) or you can check out the fallout Equestria group as they have multiple editors that would be happy to help you with your work!(they're contacted though hyperlinks at the bottom of their group page) Either way, great job and keep up the good work.
6183614 Thanks! I fixed all the errors you pointed out. Oddly enough, I was typing in MS Word. But, it doesn't really help with fixing words that end up being words when I misspell them or miss a letter, like "hit" and "hint". XD
I've got a friend i can have read over my future chapters, so hopefully there will be less issues like these in the future.
6183791 awesome! The reason i suggested using google docs is because it has a very good spell check that is very good at spotting grammar mistakes such similar words being interchanged accidentally. Anyway...This has a lot of potential so keep up the good work!
Okay, so far, this story looks interesting. I'm gonna read some more and see what it's like.