Great story. Loved the ending just wish it wouldn't of ended.

5928576 thanks, but like they say, all good things must come to an end. And sometimes, one ending leads to a new beginning. I got another story in the works, so keep an ear out.

Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)

8190426 ya, the first few chapters will be like that, but eventually I got someone to start helping with the editing. This story tends to have a bit more problems, but the chapters are shorter, I was still trying to feel things out. The basick Idea was that this was to be a quick easy read for Fo:E fans. Also, the pirates, and their religion do go beyond this story, Their meant to be a spred out, and dangrus antaganist to any hero out in the Fo:E world

8194263 basically Prism has been getting weaker, and with no place for her to properly rest, and no radiation for her to recharge, she simply has too little strength left to fight.

This, is a gut story :)
I liked it very much. It has a nice change of speed for the usual FE fic.

8194309 oh that makes sense now

8190589 well then you archieved ypur objectives

8196366 Well now that your done, I suggest you read On Rust Red Shores as it's a direct Sequel to Cumming Waters, and is completed. Dance of the Ortherus is also a continuation of the timeline, but much longer, and not finished yet.

Also it has art for each chapter. and has a coronation to Gammas Story "Better Days"

Also before reading the one-shot I did, read a few chapters of DotO, so you at least know the setting, the MC of the one shot is the DJ from Dance of the Orthrus.

I've said it before, but thanks for the read.

8198117 I already began to read DotO xD thanks for the recommendation.
also thanks to you for writting

Huh. That was pretty good.

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well be ready for pirates, very religious pirates. Unfortunately their not as flushed out as they will be in later stories, but I did start getting someone to help edit this, so theirs a sudden jump in quality after a few chapters.

I love the ending of this story! I just finished R&D so its cool that the end of both stories meet here

BL ,syawla sa modnaR
Random as always, LB

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I'd suggest reading "On Rust Red Shores" next, as it picks up right after this, and should be an easy read. "Dance of the Orthrus" is super long, but you get to find out what happend to the R&D Stable 200 years later.

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Okay will do :)

A person that loves a lot, LB

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yerp, the faction was still quite underdeveloped when I wrote this, but the actual pirates, not the ship guards or the band of teenage ganggers that's in this story, are basically super nasty, super religious sea raiders.

More fine work I should of read this sooner. thanks again for your story

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there is a direct sequel to this as well "On Rust Red Shores" It's better written as well.

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Already 6 chapters in. :)

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Oops forgot all these comments pile up on the story page, looks like I'm spamming :D you thinking about another story is great. see I read stabletec R&D years ago and loved it and just yesterday I was looking for more stories and saw that I somehow missed like 3 stories of yours over the years.

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Oops forgot all these comments pile up on the story page, looks like I'm spamming :D you thinking about another story is great. see I read stabletec R&D years ago and loved it and just yesterday I was looking for more stories and saw that I somehow missed like 3 stories of yours over the years.

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It happens, and ya, I didn't stop wrighting, just be carful, Dance of the Orthrus is a long story.

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Well Star was overly useful for such a young foal. Letting Star go will become something she regrets.

ah so this is how you conected the two story's as sequel