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Let me start out by saying, here now before I have read a single word of your story, that this looks really really promising!
I do know that covers don't speak about the quality of their stories, but that cover is one amazing picture! Maybe is it just little weird me, but I do always think higher of a fic with a quality pic, it showing that the author actually care just a little bit, and have invested in the long run since he now have spent some money on the story. Two thumps up from me already!
The chapter lengths seems to be lovely consistent, another good sign knowing how many writers that does the mistakes of letting their chapters bloat up as time goes on, and at a 6K mark do they have a good length so you can read it, digest it and actually go on with a daily life without spending half a day to do so.
Here on a last annoying little note. In your credit, (and I love that you credit your artist in such a clear matter by the way, too few does that,) have you forgotten the capital starting letter. A small little thing I know, but having been a pre-reader for 2 years by now are it sticking out.
5594929 thanks. I'm a bit dyslexic, so this stuff can easily slip by me. But as I have been writing, I have gotten better. I hope you enjoy the read,
Wow that was evil xD
Now i wonder if you left this without editing because it is how Slowtrout would read it in his mind
you have a talent to write cute little foals
ps: also now we know why all the stables in the future are death traps xD