5.5/10 in terms of a Fallout: Equestria story. It was slightly above average in terms of the author's compitency of writing, but it didn't captivate me and I don't really want to read any further than the first chapter.

Keep writing, this looks like it could be a really good story if you really give it your best shot.

Not a bad chapter but you know that "désastreux" isn't a reel word right?

Also, I like the Dragon Age 2 reference at the beginning.
I can't wait to see what Flemeth does in Dragon Age Inquisition.

I mean, yea ponies come and go, but we only get just over thirty visitors per year, and a meager two or three bother staying.

I looked up désastreux before I got to the author's note. A waste of about 5 seconds.