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Have a new chapter.
Much obliged, thank ye kindly! (lol on the audiobook note, the rascals were chomping at the bit xD
Awesome dude, oh I really want to know what happens next!
Kill them all..
This story is good enough to deserve waiting. So I shall. Also, music! I finally found a Dansonn song I like. 'Lonely Road'.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
That can happen? Damn, that's a scary thought. The most widely used life-saving thing in the wasteland, and you can become immune to it from repeated use.
Tough call. I thought about what I'd do if this were New Vegas, but then I remembered just about everything in that wasteland was content to wait for me to get there. Not a fair comparison.
"The Legion could attack at any moment! Would you like to head to the dam?"
"Nah, give me a week. I wanna check out the Divide."
Well, time for some classic courtroom combat. Assuming they don't just get lynched first. Hey, Shadow, you're good at wasteland fighting, how about the other half of the Marshal's job? ...No, not the paperwork.
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Omg... some one who has a problem with my story... I'm so happy!
Really... I am serious when I say I appreciate the honesty and comment. It let's me know we're I need to improve. After all if I can please everyone I need to quit Walmart and take up writing! Well... I still need to quit walmart, that place is just evil!
Pony names... yeah, I've had some problems with those, still do. In truth I'd probably change a few things if I had it to do all over again. Ah well hindsight and all that.
Thanks for the comment!
update?
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Sadly a lot of crap came out between Black Friday and New Years (working in retail is a sure way to go mad I tells ya!). The final straw came when my video card decided to give up the ghost. I'm finally back on my PC and attempting to figure out where I left off with the latest chapter. I'm having to rewrite some of it, but the majority of it still needs to be written entirely.
Rest assured I'm focusing all my free time between work and sleep to getting the next chapter done as quickly as I can.
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You know your story is huge when you're pumping out chapters larger than Murky Number 7.
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Ultimately that's my downfall... large chapters take awhile to write. And while I have thought about shrinking them down in size... the smaller numbers would look odd next to all those larger number chapters.
My inner Twilight 'OSD' Sparkle likes to come out at odd times.
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It ain't no problem, mate. Some readers love big chapters. For reviewers like me, they tend to be tricky. You have to factor in all that's happening -- take note of grammatical technicalities and much more. All the while, you're trying to be analytical.
I often stopped by this, glanced at it, and contemplated doing a review. Though, it'd take me a long time just to get through it.
I did manage to peek at the first chapter. Not all of it, mind you. But the first few scenes. It's a decent start. The pacing is, in my opinion, a tad sluggish. While the rest of the writing is fair enough on it's own, I'm not sure if you improved on the pacing in future chapters. Kkat's advantage over most other 1st-person stories was that she was able to keep a fast-moving pace, without hindering what was going on in the world around Little Pip.
I've seen a few authors who've been able to manifest a similar style. Ones that sometimes work just as well. I'm sure, however, that you've certainly improved since chapter one. Having a story this epic in size.
Is there a PDF file for this story ? I try to read on the go and I travel a lot. Tend to not have internet.
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Sorry it's taken me so long to respond. Been sick for the past two weeks. Still am, can't get rid of this crud. Anyway, to answer your question... kinda. Someone asked if they could work on it, but I haven't heard from them in quite awhile, so I'm not sure if they ever finished it. Sadly I didn't have the time (and still don't) to look over like they asked, so it could be my bad on that.
I believe you can download the chapters straight from FimFiction however.
Enjoying the story hope you get better as well as crap sorted out!
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Was wondering if anyone would get that. Lol
Sweet Celestia, these chapter sizes though.
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Good lord... are you eating my chapters alive? Lol
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Sorry for the late response to your comment, my free time is limited atm which is why I haven't updated for a bit.
Action scenes are rather easy for me to write... it's the stuff in between that is hard and often slow for me to write,
Yes, chapter 8. It was a hard scene to write, but one I had planned out from the second I started writing this story. It was also a chapter that got me a lot of attention from my editor and pre reader... a LOT of attention... Team Fortress 2 was never the same after that. Also... they may have actually used it as target practice at a shooting range. Seriously.
As for what comes next, it seems your already reading the next couple chapters, and by now you've either gotten through another couple or have caught up with the current chapter. Hope your still enjoying it.
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Uh... hey look, Fallout 4...
im sorry but i cannot read this because i prefer project horizons and this does not go with it so srry besides from what i gathered ... evil discord yea i think not