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Bright shine was made out of fireworks this whole time!? I SHOUOD HAVE KNOWN. SHE WASIS TOALLY A DECENDANT OF THR GREAT MoM!
Also, read aloud, the "inadvertantly" sounds out of place.
ohhh i know exactly what happened to timber already!! FoE: Heroes!!
4238137
which inadvertently is that? X3
4238393
I love Heroes, so I should probably remember what you're referencing...
4239668
That one. Sounds weird when read aloud. When speaking, that seems like the sort of term that would be implied by context, but throw off the rhythm of speech. In writing it makes semantic sense as a qualifier for the conditions under which she drags others down.
4239682
Oh, okay. Yeah, sometimes my phrasing isn't the best and you get stuff like that. Given some more work, I probably could have improved the way that was written.
4239699 Well, it's not really an error. Just sounds a little odd when spoken aloud. *Hugs
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4239668 dun wanna leave spoilers for this AND Heroes but i can always remind ya what happened is need be. read it like barely a month ago.
4240810
See, now I'm really curious what I can't remember. X3 Just send me a private note about it if you want!
4240810 I don't want to be that guy who's all, "Well actually." But isn't Heroes set in Caledonia and this in Equestria? (Baltimare/Manehattan)