For some reason, I now have the mental image of Prancer casually picking up and tossing fillies and colts with foretalons because reasons.

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Sadly, because he was abused as a fledgling, it's something leftover from his childhood. A child with his background tends to be abusive. He doesn't mean to do any of this, it's just part of how he was raised... or the lack thereof...

I await your reviewing words of wisdom with baited breath!

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Well, with training, he'll be totally prepared to take on the filly-chucking championships! Also, I suppose it's probably better than slaying them for sexual pleasure or him sexing them up in general. At least in the case of death, it's kinda one of the few inevitable things.

Silly little prancywancy. He needs hugs.

I could try to review. I actually listened to this chapter via Text to Speech twice in the past week or so, but never really sat down to write anything. Would you rather I give my reccount of 'what I remember happening' after I reread it another time (which is almost gaurenteed to not match up with what actually happened) a somewhat silly and fluffed up list of the things I liked in the chapter (which might end up being squicky or something depending) or like. Another form of response to what I read? Either way, I can't promise it'll be today if/when I do. Though i just found out about 10 minutes ago that I have no assignments due tonight in particular, so I dunno.

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I have to say, if you're enjoying my story, I'd be honored if you read it again.

In any case, I love getting feedback from you. However you'd like to write your review of my chapter is already more than I could ask for. Thank you, again!

The jist of what I remember happening:
Oh noes, we're missing a team member. WE MUST FIND THEM
oh hey apparently my other team member really likes hookers but I don't have time to get horny right now WE MUST FIND THE MISSING TEAM MEMBER
Your filly is getting good sleep that I wish I had shut up WE MUST FIND THE MISSING TEAM MEMBER
wait what do you mean our team member was a foal fiddler and went to enjoy the raiders that doesn't even OHSHI SHE'S GOING TO RAIDERS WE HAVE TO STOP HER man I should eat right AFTER WE FIND TEAM MEMBER
and then some stuff exploded and pranciewancy tossed a already-dead filly because high score!
And Nameless totally didn't have saucy hot funtime with Pranciewancy while he was unattentive because darn, unaware saucey hottimes must be freaking hard to achieve anyway. Though I guess it's possibly they didn't notice until it was over or something and then they were like WHERE DID ALL THIS COME FROM and then splode.

Oh. And that really cute hypergriff showed up at some point and I sortakinda wanna hug them.
ctrl+f says it was Gavii, so yay Gavii!

Oh. And then there was the part where they were like OHSHI SLAVERS TOOK OUR TEAM MATE AND WE'RE NOT BEING PAID TO SAVE THEM BUT WE'RE GONNA DO IT ANYWAY and then chapter ends to build up suspence for upcoming adventure and to allow time to think up and write down events of happenings. And stuff!

Inb4 they're being held in some repurposes MoM thingy that conveniently had a bunch of tools and gear for contraining and manipulating living beings without killing them, because productivity! Or maybe it's in the back of a casino and they keep slavework for entertainment. Or maybe it's just some kind of random cave filled with ponies and an adolescent dragon that wants babes to gawk at and touch andor eat.

and uh. Stuff.

Yarrrrr! x.o

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No eyepatch!

an interesting character Prancer is becoming, though Prancer Dancer from my story would be appalled to see what he did to the little filly. But seriously, you got a character with big anger issues, and tones of empathy, Without his friends, I can see him giving into his anger.

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I'm so glad you like the character!

I spent a long time researching the effects that Prancer's backstory might have on him... all of the mental issues he'd have at this point. I am very happy that it seems to have paid off!

In any case, my sixth chapter should be out soon, I'm about halfway done on the rough draft as I type this!