Hey I`m starting a little short story. Also internet getting shut off soon, won`t able to write until next weekend, sorry.

Well, next chapter then...

A few grammar/spelling errors, but nothing that bar me from understanding what's happening.
A bit short and some things are still a little bit rushed,

oh! and let me give you the same advice one wise pony gave me back in the old days...
start a new paragraph whenever the speaker of a dialogue changes and/or the next sentence starts describing something completely and I repeat myself: completely different (but that should be done only in times of desperate need)

Also: I guess that one peragraph with the...three "wave"-symbols (there's no such thing on my keyboard) marks the beginning of a dream sequence?
If that's the case I think you should mark its end in the same way (with "waves"), not with a horizontal line

That whole wolf-thing took my by surprise...freaking wereponies are in the house. Who you gonna call?

You tried a Fallout Equestria?! OMG, that`s so funny! Dude, Fallout Equestria is overdone, with Project Horizons being a exception.

I like this so far