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Those monsters are up to something, you can tell by how they disappear :). Will edit later with the corrections :p
Edit: here they are :).
"the the blink of an eye". silly stutter
"Enclave at the surface". on? with?
"Last and most". Despite common teachings, there is a comma there 'Last, and most' (the hint is the pause)
I agree with Misfit, there be alot of mistakes around these parts =P
But other then that it be the bestest chapter around and Thank you so Much~! That adventure time reference will get my Girlfriend to read this~! =D She loves adventure time and the reference was to the episode i last watched with her so Thanks~! =D
Adventure time references? Sweet mother of Celestia, now I've seen it all.