Wow, FoE has definitely opened up countless doors for writers. Well done with this piece of sexy sex. I'll be looking forward to reading more by you later on.

3177538 I have provided some links to my major Fallout Equestria side story and my other published clopfic attempt in the author's comments, if you're keen on reading more

Thanks for the compliments, I'm glad ya enjoyed it

WTF did I just read?!

3177793 Two pastel-coloured miniature horses in a post-apocalyptic worldframe having sex in a dilapidated service station.

3177808 yeah, that was what I was fearing.

3178362 I'm surprised you didn't read the warning above the description before reading the story.

3178375 you have to make that bigger

3178381 Duly noted for next time, thank you.

Albeit short, as most one-shots should be- I suppose-, it was very enjoyable. Even with just a little hint of character, such as her comments about her soft drink, gives a reason to like her. I wouldn't mind reading more about her outside of a setting such as this, though how adventurous it would be... who knows.
Either way, it made me put your FoE story in my read later list for further poking.

3182531 I'm sure to give Snap Crackle some more love (probably not in the way of cloppy things, but that's tempting too) in my short story collection

Glad you enjoyed the story

Odd, but it just occurred to me I don't even see many FoE based clopfics. Anyway, normally don't comment much on clop, but I found Snap and Root to be an oddly cute couple. Weird thing I noted though, you never really described either pony. Was that intentional to allow the reader to decide their own color schemes for them or just that you were more focused on describing the sex rather than the participants themselves?

3183795 And yet a clopfic is the only side story considered canon

3183795 I actually got a bit lazy in descriptions. Snap I didn't describe because of the whole 'first person, I know what I look like' thing, but Root I just forgot about. Plus, I didn't really have an appearance for him yet.

As for the limited appearance of FoE clopfics, I saw a void and I filled it

That was a fun little read.

I like it, I think you did great

Cool story :) Are you going to write more about fallout slavers??

Awww! What cute and nice slavers... I never thought I would say that...

Just for that you get a Favorite, this was very well done.

Short, but great!

I get a little aroused by soft drink.

How do you get aroused by drinking?