3128574 Yeah, they're pretty much horrible with their misguided ideals. Trueheart is slowly realizing he can't do the amount of good he wants within the confines of the Chain that Binds. Poor guy. He's trying.
The progression of events throughout the chapter was engaging, but the ending struck a special chord with me. The sensation takes me back to Star Wars A New Hope where Luke is staring across the desert at the twin suns, and I think it's a fitting place to go to. Like Luke, Plough is now at the true beginning of his journey and will only grow from here. He's a pretty cool dude.
Run TypoBlam.exe
"Wants let in."
"His stare was a wolf's who had just happened upon a lonely fawn.."
"The two ponies past Knight Helado and entered the house." Not sure about this one; passed seems more appropriate but MS word doesn't see a problem with it.
"“CASA DE ARENA” was carved in the south face of the building ." Space in between the G and the period.
And I have to disagree with you. Filibuckster is the best pony name, ever. Too bad he's such a little SHIT- *connection terminated*
So they took medical equipment from a dying pony, makes me hate Steel Rangers even more. Good chapter again.
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Yeah, they're pretty much horrible with their misguided ideals. Trueheart is slowly realizing he can't do the amount of good he wants within the confines of the Chain that Binds. Poor guy. He's trying.
Thanks a bunch for reading and commenting!
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Hey, now! I'm almost finished with the next chapter, there buddy!
And thank you so much! I'll do my darndest to make keep upping the quality.
This was a good read. [SPOILERS INTERNALLY]
The progression of events throughout the chapter was engaging, but the ending struck a special chord with me. The sensation takes me back to Star Wars A New Hope where Luke is staring across the desert at the twin suns, and I think it's a fitting place to go to. Like Luke, Plough is now at the true beginning of his journey and will only grow from here. He's a pretty cool dude.
Run TypoBlam.exe
"Wants let in."
"His stare was a wolf's who had just happened upon a lonely fawn.."
"The two ponies past Knight Helado and entered the house." Not sure about this one; passed seems more appropriate but MS word doesn't see a problem with it.
"“CASA DE ARENA” was carved in the south face of the building ." Space in between the G and the period.
And I have to disagree with you. Filibuckster is the best pony name, ever. Too bad he's such a little SHIT- *connection terminated*
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Thanks for the help again, compadre!
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No prob. If I can make a suggestion for a future title in the same vein as the last one, "Caught With Their Pants Down".
I'm sure you can do a lot with a title like that.