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some fixings :)
"cargo container that Rudy and Crackshot" Ruby.
"there's been a firing burning in the forest" Fire.
there was one or 2 others but I forgotted them.
ooo ooo ooo, also the bit with the changeling. Was hard to follow who was saying what.
I liked the part with time.
ruby had better be okay
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Grammar errors fixed. I'll try to fix the conversation bit too. I had this picture in my head of it cutting back and forth between Brutus asking a question, then the pony Cane was talking to answering that question as though Cane had just asked the same thing, then Cane asking and vice versa. I'll see if I can't find a way to redo it
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Nope she's dead
3172643you're a dick lol
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on the plus side the tardis could save her... yup.
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The mistakes are killing me! D:
But all in all it's still really flipping Awesome~!