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Check is a traitor . But she's gonna get what's coming to her I hope anyways . Good chapter again.
3111509 One thousand rads is dead.
3111597
Oh, okay. Thanks. I do play the Fallout games occasionally, but in FO3 and New Vegas (which I bought on Steam recently) I tend to make sure I stay below 100 rads. No radiation poisoning for me!
By the way, you are a horribly cruel person!
3111878 But are you enjoying the fic?
3111882
Yes, just like I enjoy most of them, even if it drives me nuts that almost everyone destroys their characters. I feel like it's just too cliche and overdone.
3117967 Aria's not fat, she's just big by wasteland standards. She had three square meals in a time of plenty up until five days ago. Most wastelanders, even Stable Dwellers, have never eaten as well as Aria did.
The Doctor in Equestria.
Not my favourite thing as it tends to be used in one of two major ways. Either as Doctor ex machina, there to swoop in and save the day by distracting the reader from the author being too lazy or inept to resolve a scene, or he is there to deliver exposition (all too often unnecessary, but in this case delivered reasonably well) that could just as readily, and more effectively, be delivered by another character.
A third way, and less common on its own but often found in conjuction with the other two, is that he exists in the story just to say that he exists in the story.
But otherwise, keep going, everything else is pretty good.
Check has gone from a character I liked to character I want to beat the ever living crap out of!
Im rereading this and no matter how many times I read this part
I always get a really bad feeling that you're gonna make me sad... like Murky Number Seven levels of sadness here