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Why does the blue mare in the picture look like Trixie? Isn't she suppose to be the Goddess now?
7956689 It's a projection above her vats. In FoE, that's how she communicated with LittlePip (and telepathy, but that's not important). We never see her actual body
...Well, that was unexpected! :D
Oh, the rest of the chapter was good, too, but, you know, having just read it, the ending is freshest in my mind.
(Sorry I don't have time for more detailed commentary.)
Well we know what her sexual preference is now........ undead
so many references I cant handle them... I don't remember if it was this chapter or the last one with the Red vs Blue reference but man was it god.
7957587 Yeah, unexpected is a good word ;p Was a bit worried how it will be received to be honest
Glad you enjoyed it^^
(It's okay, trust me, I know how busy people can get)
7958246 Actually, it would be more accurate to say that she doesn't have any sexual preference... I think. Not sure if that's the correct way to describe it.
7958297 I think in there was one in chapter 3 and one in chapter 4. Chapter 3 was:
And chapter 4:
There could have been one or two more that I forgot about
7960409 I remember there was a skull one. The bit about killing someone/somepony with their own skull
7960411 Oh yeah, I remember. Looking over the chapters I couldn't find it. So yeah, three references then.
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Well, no complaints from me.
Thanks. :)
Considering fluttershy was the progenitor of the magic systems that resulted in the bomb, im very interested in how this might play out with our good doctor and ditzy. Thanks for writing!
If she's like this with Brahmin and ghouls, I can't wait to see Angel interact with griffins.
It's Alive!!!! The story lives!!!
Good chapter, btw. Nice to have some detail on Angel's morality.
i can be medically diagnosed as a sociopath, yet i was easily able to cheat most psychological tests at only age twelve. of course, she may not be sociopathic, but may have some type of psychosis. I noted from the way she negotiates and mentions her experiments that she seems to have diluted empathy, but doesn’t appear to be emotionally detached to the world. she also appears to have some delusions, as she, oddly enough, is not okay with killing (i think), yet she easily is able to arrange deaths for people she deems ‘morally despicable’.
analysis: crazy with a side of confused
How lucky she is to have had an entire mental conversation without a single soul coming by her...
You know, I just now happened to think about the new, refreshing dynamic introduced in this story concerning the statuettes, fragments of Rarity's soul made to represent each of them respectively.
I found this chapter to bring a lot of...sad/happy feelings.
it's sad, in a way, because not many people can truly sympathize with her in any capacity.
they can't understand, and instead ostricIze and alienate her.
its...just sad that way.
But what makes this chapter happy is that she found ponies/brahmin who can, in a way, or at least tolerate her company without discrimination.
We also got to see another part of her, a genuinely good part that isn't a fake smile trying to diet you. She even played ball! (Played with a ball), mostly for the...um...cows amusement.
When nopony would talk to them, she did.
and when they thought their treatment was wrong, she agreed.
But then there is Ditzy, loveable undead Ditzy Doo...you really did a good job making her loveable in this story, good sir. A wonderful job indeed.
It truly is an aching pain in the soul to remain unrecognized and misunderstood...it's vexing, and numbing.
sews a certain seed of general hatred towards the populace, which I can somewhat see in Angel.
Not a brewing hatred of ponies in general, just a general apathy towards most, and hatred towards those who discriminate and call her names.
So beside the chapter suddenly jumping to twice its normal length, which is only bad because consistency is key, was this a really nice chapter! Without any major incisions were we able to get under the skin of Angel in so many ways, and I even got to like the Fluttershy statuette, which is a new thing for me as I normally hate it when people put show ponies into the wasteland.
Nitpicks:
"he was one of the few unicorns in Stable Eight besides the security ponies that regularly visited gym." Missing a the
"Would three hundred cups be enough to convince you to journey to Appleloosa with us?”" 300 cups of wiskey is a pretty good payment, just saying!
" Or questioning again why did she suddenly spoke up." Either delete "did" or make into "speak"
"What could possibly those little ones do to a grown pony?!" Danish brain again, but I think they should be shifted around
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Ugh, the lenght of it... I was really surprised how long the chapter had turned out to be. The fact that all chapters since this one are about as long isn't helping...
Thanks for pointing those out^^ The last one though I am pretty sure both versions would be fine, and the way it is sounds better to me
(I came across these while looking something up/rereading a bit:)
"that I was desiring a cuites with her and that I was using"
"that I was desiring coitus with her and that I was using"?
Not entirely sure that that's what you meant, but it seems plausible.
"able to harness this and device a method of using it to help ponies"
"able to harness this and devise a method of using it to help ponies"?
"Still, I would advice you seeing a dentist with"
"Still, I would advise you seeing a dentist with"?
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Thanks for spotting those^^
this reminds me of a story told from Ditzy's viewpoint, where her friend went feral when she became extremely angry at a group of Raiders...
Wait what!