After 200 years, Scootaloo wakes up from magical stasis to find herself in the Equestrian Wasteland. She has to figure out a new place for herself when her friends and family are all long dead as a new threat looms on the horizon, one from her past.
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Can she glide though?
8011833 Probably.
Well, I finally got around to reading this story now I got a break in writing my own Fo:E story, and I can say all the good things I've been hearing about this weren't wrong. This story deserves all the praise it's getting! I really love it, I always kind of liked the whole pre-war characters living in the wasteland thing in Fo:E stories, but having it as Scoots is awesome because she's awesome!
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Can't wait to see more of this when the next chapter is released!
8052647 Glad you're liking it, and I'm actually working on chapter 3 now.
8052666 You're welcome, keep up the good work!
8052678 Thanks, I'm really glad people have been liking this fic, chapter 3 should be done today at the earliest.
Damn, poor Scoots...
"I sid." said sid
I just read these first two chapters (and the prologue), and.....aaaaaa, I'm very conflicted.
First of all, I love the concept. Scootaloo's one of my top three favourite characters from the show and this is a very interesting and unique situation to place her in. I can see there's a lot to be gained and learned from this. You definitely seem to have a good grasp on storytelling and worldbuilding, and I get the feeling that the story as a whole is going to be going to some good places.
But, the writing feels really, really rushed. Scenes go by in the blink of an eye without much substance to them. Spike reacted to Scootaloo like he hadn't seen her in a couple of months, not 200+ years. The dialogue is really quick cut, seeming at times like bullet points, and sometimes the characters don't really talk like real people. It's really quite distracting as I read.
I don't know. I want to know where the story goes, but I'm not quite enjoying the read itself.
8865977 The first few chapters were rushed but it gets better later.
Is 117 not a halo reference?
10120906 I am amazed no one's commented on that before, yes it was a Halo reference, though ironically the Stable itself is a tribute to a different franchise.
I wish I wouldn't have had my 5 years of not writing my story... sigh... I could've been in so many things, I hope that people still care about FOE
Mareizona woooooooo
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