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-7 points for not having a talking animal sidekick... other ponies does not count.
So serious question... What would it take to get a chapter, not necessarily plot related, where Shadow is the main person and we can all bask in her glorious nicknames? I mean it, I would seriously pay to see that... or at least commission some kind of cover for the story!
Packrat, the Looting One, calling her potential loot/ammo for crap? Heresy I say! No one would ever loot crap!
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"She turned towards Clover. You’re up next.” Needs an "
"I should letter her borrow this one once I had finished it." Let
"“But probably not incorrect. I, on the other hoof, have been going on dangerous explorations for years now." Seeing as the mane 6 are beginning to turn grey haired at the start of the war is it properly not just years, but decades, that she have been in action.
"Footnote. Level Up. Lucky Strike. You really didn’t do much, but you leveled up anyways. A for effort I guess. Good job! Hits have a % chance of being critical." Need a number, and are pretty sure that your footnotes normally is written in bold.
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