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So that happened.
Sorry for how long it took. This chapter would have been out a week ago, except I was sick the last week and a half, and my head was so muddled that I didn't trust myself to make good on any editing. I'm feeling much better now, and my editor and I finally went over the chapter, so here it is. Enjoy!
Edit: Also, a milestone: The Chrysalis is now my longest story!
You know, I just said the same thing after reading this chapter.
That certainly was interesting. I like how affectionate Starlight seem to be toward Whisper's natural form in particular. Despite the many changeling stories on here, it's rarely explored much.
Starlight finally got laid. Can't say I was expecting it to happen with Whisper, but that's alright.
A shameful part of me wants a very detailed chapter on it, but the odds are not in my favor...
Congrats on first a new best, and certainly different, though you drop a few lovely points, how many are chekov based or not are up for debate. But a very interesting end, and you keep nailing sickle very uniquely, even everyone in the good points. I hope you keep being inspired.
Well, that was certainly... A thing. Mixed comedy and drama. I like it.
The message from her Queen was a really heavy moment.
I love the group dynamics.
Hah, I don't think Whisper is going to have much problem getting live from now on.
7597016 And you, my good sir have just created one of the best chapters of this story. Still lovin' the fuck out of Sickle and to see this particular portion of the story -- as well as some backstory from Sickle -- made me a chuckle, smile and grin knowingly in almost rapid succession. Hats off to you! Keep it up!
That ending got me like :
Starlight that was kinda gay actually
Also MY SHIP IS REAL
7597016 Need that scene at the end... I NEED IT!
Please.
7597016 *Clapping*
Ch 19 Just Relax
She had to pause to remind me to relax several times as he hooves worked over my body.
her
when she she snickered softly.
when she snickered
I thought he wouldn’t attribute too much to significance to intimacy, but he did.
too much significance
Even if were able to override the lockdown, I could not.
if I were
She turned abruptly turned back to Starlight and myself.
She abruptly turned
This, was an extra sexy chapter. Sicky is my one OTP
As always, thank you for writing and sharing
7597513 Oh yes, super gay. And now the question is how much do they experiment with shape shifting during this momentous occasion.
*slow one man clap slowly grows as more people join in til it's a thunderous applause* that was a beautiful chapter, I remove my hat to you.
I knew they would get together, I'm so happy now.
Oh god, Starlight will likely regret this in the morning; deep down she loves Whisper but she's still not into mares really. She's almost Straight + Whispersexual.
As much as I loved this chapter for them finally-FUCKING FINALLY-getting together, I can't wait for the next one, where, I just know, Sickle is going to give them so much crap for doing it.
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I hope that's a good thing?
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Probably not, no. Though it has been pretty tempting on occasion...
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Wow, that's kind of embarrassing (Fixed!)
And wow, Sicky. I love that name, even if Dusty would be embarrassed to hear it. Sickle would probably get a good laugh, though. Starlight too, for that matter!
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Heh, I like how you put that, especially with the conversation they have in the morning.
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That doesn't sound like Sickle at all.
I........well crap pheonix, now I have to draw that. And you know I want to.
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And I just feel horrible about that
(Wheee! Had a feeling you might like this chapter, hehe )
7598618 imma draw starlight straddling whispers hips and staring into the bug pony's oceanic eyes warmly.
You are banned from laying eyes upon such a masterpiece until it is done.
7598624 For whatever it counts for, I'd like to voice my full approval and encouragement for this artistic endeavour.
7598267 Despite it being something obvious I didn't expect it to happen. I wonder how she'll feel about it in the morning. Not sure how either will feel about it really.
And the moment Starlight said she wanted to have sex to Whisper, a thousand shippers suddenly felt a disturbance in the force....a very sexy lurid disturbance.
I approve of this.
Okey, is it wrong if i emphasise with Sickle and Dazzle? XD
I like how they characters are evolving
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Eyup!
Sickle is gonna give them all so much shit for this.
I would love if there was a 'side story' of naughty bits for Starlight and whisper... that would be... soo wonderful. Unlikely, but a fan can dream. T his chapter, through most of it, especially the latter half of it, had me squeeing, cheering and flailing about with a madfool grin big enough to outdo pinkie. I'd have to say, i think i love this story more than the original fallout Equestria.
THE SHIP SAILS
TOOT TOOT
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Yay!
Noooo!
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I like all the major characters, but there's something about Sickle that's just so much fun to write.
...Even if it gets a little weird at times. *returns to writing*
7598624 7598639 Myself also.
7599695 excellent! then I hope you have more fun soon XD
Some part of me was silently screaming "YES! IT HAPPENED!" when I got to the end of this chapter. Woo!
I have a feeling the follow up to this is gonna be... interesting for the two of them, haha.
7598639 your icon is awesome, and your approval noted!
I really love where this is going...
This one is certainly a good development.
And what a coencidence - I read it in the hairstylist salon!
So. A ship we've wanted from day one sailed. And so did a ship we never, ever wanted
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But... but then she'd be naked!
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Heh, if you think that's bad, imagine how Dusty must feel!
7608678 I also like how that you have Starlight but head with Sickle but you don't make so that Starlight completely right and Sickle is wrong. I've always felt it was more satisfying to have characters, even ones who are wrong, have good reasons behind their choices and actions. Hopefully we'll see a bit more of Sickle's reasons, soon.
My heart stopped ...
Side note though, I'm half hoping there will be some consequences between Dusty and Sickle come morning. I'm ok with Whisper and Starlight not knowing how to react, or to react at all. Whisper was even explicit in that she had no idea how to respond to a situation that was alien to her experience, and Starlight is still learning maturity from her friends. That and ... ... ... yeah, it'd take an army to stop a drugged, drunk and horny Sickle. But Sickle did just exhibit the same lack of respect for consent that Whisper was scolding Dazzle for earlier, and then some.
Dusty said 'no' in so many words, and Sickle did as she wanted anyway so... he'd even be justified in telling her that was rape. Probably take longer for Starlight to grasp that, but Whisper probably would recognize it if Dusty said something. Can't imagine any of them splitting with Sickle over it, especially given that Dusty knew of Sickle's lack of self discipline long before partnering up with, but could definitely see it as a point of "This is why you need to learn self control Sickle" coming up. 'cause even she seems to be recognizing the importance of the friendship to her well being.
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People don't get reply notifications when you reply to them from the main page...
Neither me nor Blewfire got notified of your response there.
Waiting for the sex tag to be added.
83.56% of me is hoping for clop.
Of the 16.44% that doesn't hope for clop. 8.22% hopes for a seperate story that is clop for this story.
Clearly the Changeling Queen loved her brood.
As always, Sickle is there to bluntly sum up what we're all thinking.
It's a bit of an odd idea to consider her the audience substitute, though
Good luck finding volunteers for that, Dusty
Starlight is such an easy mark :p
I refer you to what is commonly called "the world's oldest profession. professionalism doesn't exclude it
Ah, that's how she does it
Well, that got lost in translation
Her Secret Service mindset just got upgraded to Bodyguard Mindset!
She'd be so horrified if she found out all that coat and mane care was completely wasted on Whisper
Or a night spa?
Hah. They just confirmed the wild rumours Sickle has been spreading around
She's too perfect, dammit! It's getting suspicious!
I'm not entirely sure a horse can "sit back". But I think the show actually did that anyway... :-\
Also, she's waaay too relaxed to storm off over silly inter-pony relationship complications.
...lying next to a person she kinda likes, with the remains of the arousal from Dazzle's treatment still lingering...
Yeah. I can imagine.
Heh. Somehow that doesn't surprise me at all.
Oh, you ass
Oh, true. She didn't like him at all at the start...
Hey, shooting's your idea of fun, hacking is hers. Don't knock it.
Haaahahahaha. Subtle, Starlight. Real subtle
She likes you, you ridiculously clueless bugpone. How do you not sense that?
Well, it's probably still a bit of a sore point that they're all dead?
Yup, called it.
Yeah, I guess the amount of time she could've survived even after draining all of the cocooned changelings would've been insignificant compared to the time the changelings in the still-working cocoons had. Not enough to let the outside clean itself a bit, anyway
Huh. Welp. Looks like she sure had confidence in you, Whisper
Though "the hive lives on in you" isn't very reassuring. Given the fact none of her cocoon-mates made it, it kinda means she probably is the only one left.
Well, if Dazzle and Emerald aren't changelings, that is :)
"So... more than three times, then?"
Sickle: "Ah, fuck off."
lol. I think she rather takes to the Gospel of Sir Robin
Oho? Dusty's got a sweetheart?
Yes indeed. Sure did.
The sentiment is quite general, I assure you
I'd say this seems like the perfect moment to get completely stinking drunk... but Sickle will still be there when you sober up anyway, so it won't help you forget
Well, allrighty then. To quote a certain pony... “So… that happened.”
Remarks and corrections:
> “Okay. I’m going to go up and talk to Dusty real quick, then we can go.
Missing end quote.
> “Okay, then!” She said, turning around
Shouldn't have a capital letter on "she"
> That is a natural reflexive reaction to the manual stimulation of an erogenous zone
"manual"?
7607941 all aboard the cargo freighter! I'm going ship'n!
Okay, another outstanding chapter. Just, wow. I'm honestly at a loss for words. Just know that I have never been this happy for two fictional characters having sex. It felt... right.
Wait, the changeling's name actually IS Whisper?
That just seems wrong for a cover for a race of bugpone.
Did anyone else notice that one of Whisper's sister was named Midnight? Like starlight's mother? >3> It's probably irrelevant of course, given the details around 'where' they were, but still, interesting things to note xD
So that... Didn't just happen because it happened awhile ago for the rest of you.
I was hoping they'd just stay friends honestly. But the way it happened... "You mean this?" I teared up a little. >//>
7598624 Did this picture ever get done?
Is it just physically and mentally impossible for her not to slander somebody else's name when a dressing them or talking about them?
I wear you could base every name that comes out of her mouth using the letters
C , F , K , N , U , T , H , B , and I
I can't help but notice that she is attempting to act grandeur and cool, as if she wants this selection of freinds to know that she is cool and that they should think so too.
It actually seems to me that she seeks attention and acceotance, and when somebody is not receptive they usually piss her off...or die.