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    RBDash47's Stories (2)

    • PONY Legacy
      Rainbow Dash is accidentally transported to the Grid, where she finds that friends may be enemies.

      18,213 words · 1,810 views · 221 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Old Friends
      She noticed the pony for the first time when she was young, not long after she'd received her cutie mark. He became her oldest friend.
      2,263 words · 1,763 views · 247 likes · 3 dislikes
    Sep
    21st
    2012

    Originally posted to the Vault on 4/27/12.

    I can't help but feel there's not been as much attention paid, fanfiction-wise, to our benevolent Princess of the Sun, as there has been to the darker Princess of the Night. I expect that's why, really - often the darkness is what's more interesting, what draws us in and makes us wonder, makes us think... but sometimes we just need some sunshine in our lives.

    [Slice-of-Life] • 8,500 words

    Princess Celestia tires of constantly being surrounded by decorum, deference, and formality, and decides to take a day off from being Princess. But visiting Ponyville incognito is harder than she expects. Will she be able to fit in and make friends without blowing her cover?

    Hit the break for a look at the fox behind the curtain, and links to Sunny Skies All Day Long around the ponynet. Don't forget to grab an eBook from the Vault's Downloads page, if you are so inclined!

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    Where do you live?

    I currently live in Maryland.

    What kind of work do you do? (i.e. are you a student, do you have a career/day job, etc)

    I'm in retail at the moment while between more stable jobs. No pun intended.

    How did you discover My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic? When did you realize you were a fan of the show?

    My primary hangout is the Order of the Stick forums, and when the first ponythread went up (which is now on its 42nd iteration) I kept seeing it as the topic most recently posted in on that subforum. Thinking it was a snark thread, I took a peek in there and saw it wasn't. Some pics of the main characters caught my attention, as I noticed they resembled the Powerpuff Girls, and not the overly saccharine styles previous. Reading some more gave good impressions, and there were mentions that the songs tended to ear work. So in a fit of boredom and curiosity, I followed a link to Winter Wrap Up. And lo and behold, it wasn't too cheesy, but there was actual HARMONY, I liked the voices, the animation was good, and there hints of actual plot? Knowing nothing of the series, I was curious on why Twilight didn't have or couldn't use magic. And after a few days of having the song stuck in my head, I caved and watched the pilot and enjoyed it. And having a decent amount of free time that day, proceeded to binge the whole series up to that point. (right before Fall Weather Friends IIRC). After that, there was no going back.

    Do you have a favorite episode?

    Oh gracious, that's a tough question. I would have to say that would be Sweet And Elite, as I feel it's the best written episode. Everything flowed very naturally!

    Who is your favorite character based purely on the canon of the show itself? Would your answer change if you considered the fandom in its entirety (i.e. art, fanfiction, memes, etc)?

    I identify rather strongly with Twilight Sparkle. Rarity has been climbing the ranks to #2 of the Mane 6 recently through sheer ham, but Twilight will always have a special place with me.

    How did you come up with your handle/penname?

    I have always been PhantomFox. Foxes are my favorite animal, and the alliteration made it sound like a superhero of some sort

    Have you written in other capacities (other fandoms, professionally, etc)? When did you first start writing?

    Shameless plug time! I am currently the writer in a writer/artist duo for my webcomic Deep Forest. Check it out at http://www.deepforestcomic.com/comic. I first started writing back in middle school with the characters that eventually found their proper home in Deep Forest. I wrote this three part novelette, and boy, was it horrible. It was this sorta adventure superhero thing that makes me cringe when I remember it. I can't believe I thought backwards names were clever...

    What do you like to do when you're not writing?

    A little of everything. Reading, board games, video games, movies, etc...

    Who is your favorite author (published or fanfiction)? Do you have a favorite story or novel?

    Hmm... tough choice. I'd have to say Terry Pratchett for his Discworld series. My favorite book... currently the Belgariad Quintology by David Eddings.

    Stephen King believes that every author has an "ideal reader" - the one person who they write for, the one person whose reactions they care about. Do you have one, and if so, who is it?

    Um... not that comes to mind right away.

    Do you have any tips for aspiring writers, or writers who are struggling with their own stories?

    Characters, characters, characters! Understand your characters! Keep asking questions to yourself about them until they become actual people in your mind. Then they take on a life of their own instead of being pure plot movers. Then they start writing themselves to a certain extent.

    What is your typical writing process? (Do you work through multiple drafts, do you have any prereaders/editors, etc?)

    I'm a planner, so I work out the plot framework completely before I get started, and then write it all from beginning to end. After that, I revise it as much as I can and pass it off to as many people as are willing to help to help catch typos and give advice.

    What inspired you to write Sunny Skies All Day Long?

    The beginning of A Bird In The Hoof, where Celestia is at the luncheon. You can practically SEE her wanting to say "Will you all please relax? I just want to hang out as friends!" That inspired the opening scene of Sunny Skies, and when I shared it, I was demanded to do this whole thing entirely.

    Did you run into any tough spots or challenges when writing Sunny Skies?

    Few people know that there was originally a first draft that got half of it re-written into what it is today. Trust me, it needed it. Pinkie didn't figure out that Celestia was in disguise, and Celestia ended up going to a picnic AJ was having. Except Twilight wasn't there and was working herself to death trying to rewrite Luna's history to now include her redemption. So Celestia and the gang trooped down there and taught her a lesson, the friendship report triggering the reveal as it is now. The problem was that the core conflict of the piece was all over the place, as Thanqol pointed out to me at the time. So after talking things over with him, I rewrote the entire middle section to be about Celestia struggling to keep her disguise a secret, and that led to what it is now.

    When you set out to write Sunny Skies, did you have any specific messages or themes in mind?

    Mainly I wanted to show that Celestia is a humble Princess, and just wants her subjects to be her friends, and hates it when her title gets in the way.

    Where can readers drop you a line?

    My main hangout, as mentioned, is the Order Of The Stick forums, so send me a PM through there. I go by the same name there.

    Is there anything else you'd like to add?

    I'm continually astounded at the sheer mountain of praise this thing generated, and I can only dream of writing something that'll get anywhere near the same reaction. Doesn't mean I can't try!

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    Comments ( 27 )

    #1 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I have a suggestion on a story you ought to do a interview on. It is called Background Pony. It's a great story. And, like most of your interview stories, has around 330,000 words. It is written by shortskirtsandexplosions.

    #2 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>373655

    Background Pony is incomplete; when it completes, I'll be adding it to my review queue.

    >like most of your interview stories, has around 330,000 words

    :rainbowhuh: Discounting Fallout: Equestria, the longest fics in the Vault are in the 160k range...

    #3 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>373693 Oh, my mistake. Sorry.

    #4 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>373725

    I'm certainly not put off by long fics, but man, that'd be a ton to read through! An average of 330k words, with 55 fics in the Vault as of today, would be just over 18 million words.

    #5 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Good story. Nicely written, enjoyable, captures the heart of the show, etc. Good story.

    #6 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Yay, Pterry fan!

    There seem to be quite a few of those around here... :rainbowderp:

    :rainbowderp::rainbowhuh:

    #7 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    "Sunny Skies All Day Long" is the most "episode-like" fanfic I've read. Exactly what I came to FIMFiction to read.

    #9 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Tried reading it. Got bored about half-way and gave up.

    #10 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Sunny Skies is great fun.  I'm a huge fan of Celestia.  In the show she's pretty fun, but when the fans get ahold of her, she becomes one of the deepest, most interesting characters there is.  She's a princess who might be something like a goddess, who saved the world with her sister from a spirit of chaos, then had to banish that sister to save the world a second time, had to live a thousand years separated from her Luna, is generally regarded as perfect, but has been cut off from the Elements of Harmony...there's just so much there.  And Sunny Skies takes on the way she is so separated from all the ponies who she loves, but can't really connect with as friends, even though she might like to.  It's just awesome.:twilightsmile:

    #11 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Sunny Skies was a pretty interesting read, and a unique idea. It is nice to see a new side to Celestia, and her desire to be treated (even if only occasionally) like a casual nothing-special pony.

    #12 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I don't see why this is the highest rated story on the site. I mean, it is well written, but there's absolutely no depth to it. I guess I just have really different tastes than the average user here.

    #13 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #14 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>374997

    I have to agree with you on that lack of depth. But that, in my humble opinion, is probably why the story feels so episode-like and is therefore liked. Let's face it, canon episodes also aren't exactly Mariana-Trench-deep either :pinkiesad2:, but (probably) every one of us here loves them. :twilightsmile:

    That said, I've read many deep, moving, or otherwise strong stories here on FimFiction. Many of them could certainly use more recognition. :twilightsmile:

    #15 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Oh hey I remember this one. It was a really good balanced pony fic. Glad to see it hit the vault.

    #16 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>373727

    Fun interview as usual.

    Also, I can vouch for Background Pony. It may be long, but it's one heck of a good read. Like I told the writer, "[Background Pony] is the best novel I've ever read."

    #17 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>375119

    I'm not going to reiterate simply because I like your avatar.

    #18 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>375222

    That... god damn, now I feel really guilty. Well done!

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    #20 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Hmm.

    #21 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    You know, I just realized something, about a month and a half after I originally discovered "Sunny Skies All Day Long"... Celestia goes by the name of Sunny Skies, and part of the title is "All Day Long"... and "Sunny Skies" claimed to live in Fillydelphia... Possible "It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia" reference? Or am I overthinking this way too much and should go back to remembering how nice the story was?

    #22 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    It's a pity it's full of mistakes- "Bic Mac", spelling ain't as 'aint, and such.

    However, the casual lightheartedness of it isn't a fault- at most, everypony's playing a little too close to type, but this helps keep things casual and cheerful. I liked it :ajsmug:

    #23 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>379735

    If you send me a list, I'll certainly correct any errors there are.

    #24 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>385113

    Sure- just a minute. It'll be a little scant of explanations as I want to go take a nap :ajsmug:

    #25 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>385113

    There you are! PMed. :ajsmug:

    #26 · 34w, 17h ago · · ·
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    Hm. If you are looking for fictions that're akin to episodes, might I offer anything written by the astounding Cold in Gardez?

    He is freaking brilliant.

    I remember reading this story when it first popped up, hm. I think Sunny Skies deserves a revisit! Who doesn't like a nostalgic romp into a great story, hm?

    #27 · 33w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh yeah... that was one of my favorite short reads.

    It really captured that "episode" feeling that "Slice of Life" stories are supposed to have.

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