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Sep
16th
2012

A second teaser for the die-hard fans... · 3:56am Sep 16th, 2012

Pegasus Device is, as of this writing, almost finished. Chapter 3/4 was roughly finished a couple minutes ago. Currently, it stands at a total of 38608 words.

For the people anxiously waiting, I have a little teaser. Obviously, it includes SPOILERS

YUP, BIG SPOILERS BELOW

DON'T LOOK IF YOU DON'T LIKE SPOILERS

Towards the back wall she finally glimpsed the image of a sweating and swearing stallion, squeezed in between a cluster of shaking pipes.

“What’s- ah, Flocking piece of manure... what’s up, Gentle? Why aren’t you at your station?”

“Well,” she began, attempting to get closer. Gauge was about twenty feet away, but the spiderweb of metal blocked her from approaching. “There’s been a development with the failures. They started rushing the workers below. I’ve come to find you before they lose control of the repairs and something bad happens up here.”

“A sweet sentiment,” Gauge replied through clenched teeth, frowning at a rusted nut he couldn’t seem to break. “But no worries. If I don’t get this switched before they stop cycling the steam, it’ll just blow out some machines on the other side of the factory. The only way I’d be in trouble here-”

His words were cut off as every light in the room slammed off, just to be replaced by a low red light. It circulated the room quickly, tossing numerous shadows in the already-confusing labyrinth. An air raid siren rose from the depths of the factory, it’s peircing howl reverberating inside the worker’s heads. Gauge looked around slowly and suddenly froze, his face turning incredibly pale. In an instant he was frantically struggling to escape from his position, but found himself wedged perfectly in place.

“... is if the main computer system were to suffer a major malfunction.”

As if an army of ghosts had invaded, a million groans and whines overwhelmed them. A second later, the pipes surrounding the stallion exploded.
“GAAAAUUUGE!”

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Comments ( 11 )

Hmm... neat. I'll like to see how this plays out. :trixieshiftright:

GUUUUUAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

I never knew the writer of "Rainbow Factory" would be here on good ol' Fimfiction. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: INSTANT INTERNET SENSATION, THAT'S WHAT YOU ARE!!!

Sweeet.
MUST READ PEGASUS DEVICE!

Can't wait to read the sequel. Keep up the good work.

Need a link:flutterrage:

SHIEEEEEEEEEET

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