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The Sentient Cloud 43969

Joined June 2012
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    The Sentient Cloud's Stories (4)

    • Those Who Came Before
      A mysterious metal object is found in the caverns beneath Canterlot... and it wasn't made by ponies

      16,314 words · 10,583 views · 979 likes · 16 dislikes
    • The Piano Man
      A pianist from Earth is suddenly summoned to Equestria - to become a Piano-playing playing slave.
      30,380 words · 5,367 views · 668 likes · 17 dislikes
    • The Piano Man: Act II
      The Piano Man is free, but must now recover from his captivity and adjust to life in Equestria.
      94,433 words · 6,624 views · 914 likes · 32 dislikes
    • Red Vs Blue: Epsilon in Equestria
      When Church is sucked back into the Epsilon Unit, he finds himself in a world filled with ponies.
      20,104 words · 3,169 views · 225 likes · 8 dislikes
    Aug
    18th
    2012

    For readers of The Piano Man: Act II...

    Progress on the next chapter will be slowed, but not exactly 'delayed'. I explain why below.

    For readers or The Piano Man, and The Piano Man: Act II...

    The reason why the next chapter of The Piano Man: Act II will be delayed, is because I am looking into submitting The Piano Man to Equestria Daily. In order to do that, I am doing a major tidy-up of the entire story, and hunting down every last mistake I can find. (And so far, I found a disgusting amount in the first chapter. Why did you people read it? There's so much wrong!)

    I will update every chapter at once, with added lines and reworked scenes - and with a complimentary blog-post to go with it. I'm not going to recommend that you read it, as that's not really necessary, but it will look a lot nicer.

    For readers of Red Vs Blue: Epsilon in Equestria...

    I hate to tell you all, but RvB: EiE will be updated very irregularly, and slowly. This is because The Piano Man: Act II has just over double the number of favorites that EiE has, and I frankly enjoy writing it much more. I'm very sorry, but rest assured that I do not plan to just let the story die.  

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    Comments ( 17 )

    #1 · 40w, 20h ago · · ·
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    Awwww... I suppose that I'll just have to be patient and wait for more EiE :pinkiesad2:

    #2 · 40w, 20h ago · · ·
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    >>294736 At the risk of plugging, ('At the risk of.' Who am I kidding? :twilightsheepish:) may I say that you could try either of the two 'Piano Man' stories. They're an okay read. (Although, like I said, I'm finding a sickening amount of errors in the first one.)

    #3 · 40w, 20h ago · · ·
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    I heard that EqD didn't accept HiE fics, but I dunno for myself.  Never actually looked into it.

    Good luck regardless though!

    #4 · 40w, 20h ago · · ·
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    >>294739 I intend to - but my time has been a little limited lately... I've got some catching up to do.

    #5 · 40w, 20h ago · · ·
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    >>294740 Actually, the rules say that they don't accept Brony in Equestria fics. :ajbemused:

    That said, I'm investigating further, as in the first Piano Man, the main character's brony-status does not actually have a notable impact on the story. It's most prominent appearance is near the end with the use of 'This Day Aria'. I'm hoping that its relative insignificance to the overall story means that I still have a chance.

    #6 · 40w, 20h ago · · ·
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    >>294744 Pssh. Bitch please!

    Hit 114, then talk to me. :pinkiecrazy:

    God god, I'm a busy person.

    #7 · 40w, 14h ago · · ·
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    >>294747

    1 story in my read later, 3.6 million words read, and I've barely been here for a month and a half.

    I have no life.

    #8 · 40w, 14h ago · · ·
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    Can't wait to read more of Piano Man:twilightsmile:

    >>295033 1.6mil words in a week. You got competition, sir.

    #9 · 40w, 13h ago · · ·
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    >>295082

    I challenge you to a read-off! Slap with glove!

    Seriously, though. That sounds about on par with me.

    #10 · 40w, 13h ago · · ·
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    >>295103 You had a head start :trixieshiftleft: But I WILL catch up :rainbowdetermined2:

    #11 · 40w, 13h ago · · ·
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    >>295120

    Good luck with that.

    All night reading session, go!

    #12 · 40w, 12h ago · · ·
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    We read it, because when a story has THIS much of an original idea, a few mistakes don't matter to us on FIM fiction.  The fact that you made a BiE not just readable, but extremely enjoyable, means that if we find a small misspelled word, it's overlooked because we're too enthralled in the story itself.  This happens to me a lot, where I'll read a story, notice a few mistakes, and forget about them by the chapter's end.  

    #13 · 40w, 11h ago · · ·
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    Good luck friend :pinkiehappy:

    #14 · 40w, 10h ago · · ·
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    >>294744>>294747 Bitch Please Please.

    oh god why can't I stop

    If the image breaks: 1111 read laters, 89 favs to read.

    #15 · 40w, 9h ago · · ·
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    >>295474...

    We have seen the enemy, and he is us.

    #16 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Why do you taunt me with these good stories that I must wait for:pinkiesad2:

    #17 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    RvB: EiE will be updated very irregularly, and slowly.

    ... son of a bitch. Right, I'm gonna go murder some random person.

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