Originally posted to the Vault on 3/16/12.
An oldie but a goodie, originally posted at EqD almost exactly one year ago. (Now over a year ago!) Another unique take on how well the recently-freed Luna reintegrates with Equestrian society... but also looks at how society handles having her back.
[Adventure] • 60,700 words
Romance, palace intrigue, and swashbuckling adventure await our six heroines when Princess Luna summons the Elements of Harmony to Canterlot.
Hit the break for an equally well-written interview from AugieDog, as well as links to Half the Day is Night around the 'net. Don't forget to check out the Vault's Downloads page if you want your very own ebook copy!
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Where do you live?
Down along the southern California coast. In fact, every house I've lived in, every school I've attended, every job I've ever held, they've all been located within 10 miles of the hospital where I was born. I don't get around much, in other words.
What kind of work do you do? (i.e. are you a student, do you have a career/day job, etc)
I have four part-time jobs: I'm a clerk at the local library; I sing and play guitar at the local Catholic church; I host a Sunday afternoon radio program at the local university; and I write and draw comics and stories.
How did you discover My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic? When did you realize you were a fan of the show?
The first reference I recall seeing to the show was from Casey Young at the bottom of the December 15, 2010 page of her webcomic Altermeta. I'd been a fan of the original Pony show back in the 1980s - I still have the VHS tapes I recorded of it during my college years - but I didn't manage to carve out the time I needed to track the new show down on YouTube 'til the end of January, 2011.
As for realizing I was a fan, the first minute and a half did it. As I said in the review of the show I had published on Strange Horizons back in May of 2011, "Sibling rivalry, cosmic warfare, magic, myth, legend... and we haven't even come to the first episode's opening titles yet!"
Do you have a favorite episode?
What appeals to me most about the show is the way the writers take what are fairly standard children's show stories, let these six wonderfully realized and peculiar characters loose in them, and spin them into places I've never seen a cartoon go before. Which is why Lesson Zero has inched into place above Suited for Success, Sonic Rainboom, Green Isn't Your Color and Sweet and Elite for me. That the writers allow their characters to have flaws that lead them into conflict with themselves and each other makes this such a fine and unusual show!
Who is your favorite character based purely on the canon of the show itself? Would your answer change if you considered the fandom in its entirety (i.e. art, fanfiction, memes, etc)?
I'm madly in love with all six of the main characters, of course - they have so much storytelling potential! But I find Twilight's arc so far to be the most compelling, the growth she's shown since the first episode and all.
As for the fandom, I'm Fluttershy when it comes to anything even remotely social. I read Equestria Daily and Chris's reviews at onemansponyramblings.blogspot.com, but other than that, I have no idea what's going on in the fan community that surrounds the show.
How did you come up with your handle/penname?
AugieDog is the nickname of Gus Lancer, a character I began writing about 25 years ago when I was in college - I reckon I'm in the running for "world's oldest brony."
But it was only after discovering Friendship is Magic that I was able to finish any of Gus's stories. Deciding that he was a brony seemed to open him up to me in an entirely new way, and my first completed story about him, "Thoughts on Early Spring," will appear in May in the anthology Bronies for the Love of Ponies from Kazka Press.
So when I noticed that everyone at Equestria Daily used fake names, I pretended to be Gus and submitted my stuff under his pseudonym. Since then, though, I've become quite open about him being completely fictional and me being less so.
Have you written in other capacities (other fandoms, professionally, etc)? When did you first start writing?
I've been writing stories for as long as I've been able to write, but in college, I realized that my style was too florid and sticky, full of useless adjectives and sentences that tended to sink under their own weight. So I started reading writers like Roger Zelazny, Margery Sharp, and Raymond Chandler, folks known for their lean prose, to see if I could figure out what they were doing.
The first story I wrote after that was a talking animal adventure called "Rat's Reputation," and it was published in 1989 in a fanzine called Fur Version. The second story I wrote, a semi-sequel called "Crow's Curse," then won 3rd place in the 1990 Writers of the Future contest, made me $1,500, and was published in vol. 7 of the contest's anthology.
Since then, I've sold stories to places like Asimov's SF magazine and Marion Zimmer Bradley's annual Sword and Sorceress collection while my novel The Blood Jaguar came out from Tor Books a baker's dozen years ago and is scheduled to be reprinted in an illustrated edition later this year from Sofawolf Press. I also do two webcomics a cumulative seven days a week even though I don't draw all that well: Daily Grind with two pages every day Monday through Friday and Terebinth with a page every Monday and Thursday.
If anyone's interested, you can find a selection of my stories for sale in various e-book formats on my bookshelf at fictionwise.com.
What do you like to do when you're not writing?
When I'm not writing, I usually find myself wishing I was. It's one of my several character flaws: I'd rather be working on my own stuff than looking at anyone else's. Even sitting down to watch a movie gets me itchy 'cause that's a couple hours I could've spent getting some pages done!
Who is your favorite author (published or fanfiction)? Do you have a favorite story or novel?
Margery Sharp's first three "Miss Bianca" books - The Rescuers, Miss Bianca, and The Turret - and her last two, Bernard the Brave and Bernard into Battle, are little gems of what can be done with talking animal fiction. And her regular novels about human beings aren't bad, either.
Stephen King believes that every author has an "ideal reader" - the one person who they write for, the one person whose reactions they care about. Do you have one, and if so, who is it?
I don't know that I have any specific person in mind. But anyone who doesn't mind talking animals being treated in a thoughtful fashion rather than as simple sidekicks or comedy relief, I guess, might enjoy my stuff.
Do you have any tips for aspiring writers, or writers who are struggling with their own stories?
Read your stuff out loud. If your tongue trips over the lines or the words don't sound right, go back and rewrite 'til your ear tells you they work.
What is your typical writing process? (Do you work through multiple drafts, do you have any prereaders/editors, etc?)
Any time I have an idea, I need to work out the basics before I can begin writing. This means that I have to know the beginning - a person in a place with a problem - have to know generally how the middle stretches out, and have to have a vague notion of what ending I'm aiming for.
Sometimes these things will change during the writing process, but since I'm one of the apparent minority of writers who loves rewriting, I don't mind going back and monkeying with earlier parts 'til it all fits. Still, having a crude road map when I start, I find, gives me the guidance I need when the inevitable "OK. What happens next?" comes up.
I belong to a writing group, too, and their comments are always helpful when I'm hammering something together.
What inspired you to write Half the Day is Night?
After watching the first two episodes on YouTube back at the end of January, 2011, I found myself asking, "So what happens with Celestia and Luna?" Watching the next few episodes showed me clearly that the show's writers weren't going to answer that question any time soon, and I began to feel something I had never felt before: the urge to write fan fiction.
I told myself I wouldn't do it, couldn't do it, had too many projects of my own to work on to spend time on something that I could never show to anyone or do anything with. And then, Googling for information about the show, I found Equestria Daily, at that point just about a month old.
So I spent some time during the month of February writing a short story, The Biggest Little Pony, as an exercise to get a handle on the characters and submitted it to EqD. And while Sethisto liked it - this was before pre-readers - he said he wouldn't post it since folks tended to complain when he put up stories with "OC ponies" in them.
But by then, I'd been assembling the rough plot outline for Half the Day is Night for more than a month, and since I liked how it was coming together, I decided to put my other projects on hold for as long as it took - 12 to 15 chapters, I told Sethisto in the e-mail with links to the Prologue and first two chapters that I sent him on March 22, 2011. And I sent in the last chapter and the Epilogue three-and-a-half months later over the July 4th weekend.
Did you run into any tough spots or challenges when writing Half the Day is Night?
Poor Spike, actually. I had all these scenes in my head for him, working his way through the tangled web of lies floating around Canterlot and bringing the information back to the others in the palace, but every time I started writing one of those scenes, it just slowed the story's pace so much, I ended up throwing them all out. Not a single scene from Spike's point of view made it into the final story!
Other than that, though, I found writing something with pre-existing characters and an already designed world to be a lot easier than my regular writing where I have to make up everything on my own. Stringing those 60,000 words into Half the Day is Night was the fastest writing I've ever done!
When you set out to write Half the Day is Night, did you have any specific messages or themes in mind?
When I started, I just wanted to write about what happened when Luna got back to Canterlot after a thousand years away. But as I went along, I started thinking more about Celestia and Luna and the magical land of Equestria, and by the time I finished the last chapter, I knew that I needed the Epilogue to show what the story had really been about.
Where can readers drop you a line?
I set up augiedog77@aol.com for the fictional Gus Lancer years and years ago and only started using it when I was sending chapter in to Equestria Daily. So, yeah, folks can use that.
Is there anything else you'd like to add?
Looking at Half the Day is Night now, I almost think it could use a 16th chapter set back in Ponyville with Twilight going around and gathering the others' thoughts for her report to the princesses. I can't imagine I'll ever do it, of course, but, well, as somebody once said, a piece of creative work is never finished: it's just abandoned. :)







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Comments ( 16 )
I'll have to take a look at this
One of the best Luna fics I know
One of the first and certainly one of the best Luna fics there ever were. I think it was the first that had a competent, fleshed-out Luna that didn't constantly mewl sadly in her room writing poetry about nopony likes her or whatever.
That's the second professional writer (among the Bronies, of course) that I know of thanks to your interviews.
Such a splendid competition. Compared to them I'm but a speck of dust that spews stories from time to time.
>>287013
Who's the first?
>>287239
Dang it! Me and my big mouth.
Now you've got me searching RBD's interview archives to find the one. 
Fortunately the interview was posted here on FimFiction not too long ago. The writer I mentioned is Caerdwyn (his interview). He actually is a software developer (like me
), but he mentioned having some of his written work published professionally.
>>287454
It seems everyone in this fandom either works in IT or is doing a degree.
I realise that that story isn't the point of this interview, but if The Biggest Littlest Pony was on FiMFiction, I would have just favourited it so goddamn hard. Which episodes had come out when it was written?
>>286929
>>286990
Thanks muchly for the kind words!
>>287013
Don't forget Jeffrey C. Wells, known around these pages as Skywriter: he does the webcomic Skin Horse with Shaenon K. Garrity and writes some pretty entertaining pony fic.
>>287892
Actually, the first thing I did when I made an account here was upload The Biggest Little Pony. I've got five finished stories on FiMFiction and have the first two chapters of a sixth up as well.
Mike
>>287611
Yeah, could it be just a coincidence?
>>288378
Ye gods, you're right! I read some of his amazing works but somehow missed the fact that he is a pro too. Thanks for the reminder.
Holy crap you live near me! I'm from Thousand Oaks!
But I don't think my parents would take kindly to a meetup with some creepy 40-year-old guy that I've never met IRL.
However, I will check out that story.
hey i can,t update me story why is this plaese tell me ok?
>>289353
You might want to read the FAQ, which talks about adding new chapters. If you're still having trouble, you'll want to contact the site operators - this comment thread isn't the place to get help with your technical issues.
ok thankyou
This story is one of the ones I build my head-canon on (with a few modifications, both for episodes that came out after this story was written, and personal world-building).
"Half the Day Is Night" was one of the very first FIM stories I read, and it's remained a favorite all the way until now. I actually added it to the TV Tropes MLP fanfic recommendations page way back when. So what I'm trying to say is that it's a pretty cool story.