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TalonMach5


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  • 423 weeks
    STATUS UPDATE

    Gentlereader, the next chapter should be done either tonight or tomorrow. My apologies for making you wait this long. I had hoped to have this released last Saturday, but unfortunately fell ill, and wasn't able to do much of anything over the week. Well, I'm off to get back to writing, looking forward to reading your responses.

    Until next time!

    2 comments · 880 views
  • 425 weeks
    Critisim

    Recently a reader has decided to grace the comments of The Great Slave King with gems such as these:

    I am half a second from Downvoting this story. I hope there is a reason for me not to.

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    7 comments · 689 views
  • 428 weeks
    Current Progress

    Status of Book of Water: The Heart of Winter: Chapter 14 Title Pending

    52% complete

    Tentative February release.

    3 comments · 392 views
  • 439 weeks
    BON APPETITE


    Gentlereader, I've just served you up a hot, steaming serving of new chapter, please partake, imbibe, and enjoy. Compliments of the chef! Happy reading.

    Until next time!

    Made the top slots for favorites this time!

    0 comments · 455 views
  • 439 weeks
    NEW CHAPTER RELEASE IS IMMINENT

    Gentlereaders, I'm happy to announce that chapter thirteen The Book of Water: The Heart of Winter is nearly completed. This chapter is one of the largest yet, topping out at over 17k words and by the time I'm finished writing it, it may top out over 20k words. Hopefully you'll find it as fun to read as I had writing it. I had honestly only planned on writing about 10k for this chapter, but before

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    4 comments · 482 views
Sep
5th
2015

NEW COVER ART FOR THE GREAT SLAVE KING · 1:17am Sep 5th, 2015

Gentlereader PoisonSt, has created another cover art for me. It depicts the Slave King's terrible vengeance and triumph over his former masters of the Diamond Vale. Accompanied by his ever faithful companion and steadfast servant, the ever present terror in the shadows, Nightmare, the first creation, stands at the ready to slay her master's unworthy foes. Together, they've cut a swath of bloody destruction to Lord Darkpaw's throne room to claim the Slave King's place as the new rightful Lord of Earth.

As always, the artist has requested feedback, so any feedback you could offer would be greatly appreciated.

Additionally, I am still working on the next chapter of the The Book of Water, The Heart of Winter. So hopefully, gentlereader, you'll consdier this new art a taste of whats to come.

Until next time!

Comments ( 6 )

Congratulations on the new cover art. I hope to see the next chapter soon because this is getting good.

Oooooh, very nice. 10/10

I really like the art. The design of it is good as showing the Slave King as a being of power. I'm split on how Nightmare is depicted though, its nice to see how someone would view Nightmare, but i always thought of it as more of a monster. The Diamond dog reaching for the sword on the ground was a very nice touch. All in all a great art.

3370640 well the author stated very clearly that nightmare looked like a panther, so yeah

3373031 Did he? Its been forever since i read the first one, so i forgot how Nightmare was described.

3373098 Well at least he said so personally to me. I for example had thought that nightmare was bipedal until he said otherwise

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