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Chocovich 349247

Joined May 2012
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    Chocovich's Stories (34)

    • Unforeseen Consequences
      Twilight's mistake with Starswirl's spell had changed each of her friend's lives, and everything went back to the way it was before. Or did it...?

      19,683 words · 4,333 views · 528 likes · 20 dislikes
    • Blood on the Snow
      After an accident in the Everfree forest Applebloom is left blind, and now has to adapt to her new life
      6,126 words · 1,067 views · 80 likes · 3 dislikes
    • I Dare You!
      After cider season ended Applejack thought it would be fun to invite her friends over to enjoy the last barrel, but she wasn't expecting it to get as out of hoof as it did...
      8,394 words · 5,372 views · 530 likes · 71 dislikes
    • Just a Little Chaos
      Discord broke free late one night and decided to go on an adventure with Pinkie, the two of them having the night of their lives. Now Pinkie is left to pick up the pieces in Discord's absence by herself.
      12,558 words · 888 views · 67 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Where Do I Belong? What Is My Purpose?!
      16,141 words · 851 views · 49 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Welcome to... Equestria?
      2,652 words · 336 views · 40 likes · 2 dislikes
    • The CMC in... Scootaloo's Past!
      6,940 words · 1,053 views · 48 likes · 3 dislikes
    • The Switch!
      3,273 words · 713 views · 39 likes · 2 dislikes
    • The Half Blood Princess
      5,072 words · 1,471 views · 101 likes · 11 dislikes
    • Royal Intervention
      13,838 words · 1,231 views · 67 likes · 7 dislikes
    Jul
    30th
    2012

    That Moment When... · 11:25pm

    The story you just finished is 1,511 words short of EQD standard rules, and from what everyone says, it's a good story.

    Chocovich · 16 views

    Comments ( 11 )

    #1 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :fluttercry:

    #3 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>259940  *hug*

    #4 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #5 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    1,511 isn't that big a number. Add some carefully crafted filler and try again!

    #6 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>259983 But where would I add it? :rainbowhuh:

    #7 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Eh, don't beat yourself up Choco. Besides, EQD has crazy strict standards for hosting work, so yeah. No need to lose heart, take what you learned writing your last story, and use it to make a bigger, better story for submission.

    Speaking of which, I really need to start reading Candy Apples already, damn.

    #8 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>259989 Lol, maybe. Also I'll probably make the video I asked you to make that model for soon :pinkiesad2:

    #9 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>259985 Perhaps increase the size of a few paragraphs, or add some detail about 'the room was this size' or even add some interaction between some of your characters. An extra, isolated scene here or there. Just make sure that it doesn't actually -look- like filler :P

    #10 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>260003 That might work...

    But I'll do it later :moustache:

    #11 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>259996

    My god, I completely forgot about that. And I thought I had poor work ethic :rainbowlaugh:

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