A sneak peek...

The next chapter of 'Twilight the Terrible' is almost done, so here's a sneak peek at it below the page break!

Fluttershy gingerly reached out with a wing, holding it right above the filly's head. “I'm sure it is. And you're such a young filly, too, to have such a burden put on you.”

Young Twilight sniffed and her head bobbed up and down. “I-it wasn't my fault, I swear! I-it was an a-a-accident, what happened to Princess Celestia. I'm trying my best, really I am!” She looked up to Fluttershy. “I-I just want to fix things, make them better.”

Rainbow Dash suddenly flew up and thrust her forelegs out. “Fluttershy, get over here! We can't blast her with the Elements without you!”

Comments

[bloons3]

And now the fic swings from Dark to Comedy.

[aLazyPanda]

Isn't it usually the opposite?

[aidenmc3]

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It all depends on the crux of a small screw that is the thoughts of the human mind, and it is a loose screw that is threatening to plunge the entire vessel that is the human condition into the abyss.

In other words, Yes.

[mastermenthe]

Fluttershy gingerly reached out with a wing, holding it right above the filly's head.

...she's going to snap her neck!

[TJHoofer]

Rainbow Dash suddenly flew up and thrust her forelegs out. “Fluttershy, get over here! We can't blast her with the Elements without you!”

Leave it to Rainbow Dash to spoil a tender Fluttershy moment. Not to mention probably making it worse. I wonder how little Twilight is going to react after hearing that?

[Grey Warden]

United We Stand,United We Stand,United We Stand,United We Stand,United We Stand,United We Stand,United We Stand,United We Stand,United We Stand,United We Stand,United We Stand,United We Stand!!! Please make more!!!!