Time and My Little Pirates

Hey all,

First off, I want to apologize for the lag there's been lately, Real Life has been super busy securing my job and getting things in order for it, so I haven't had much time to write (if you're wondering why Heavy Crown got a new chapter, that was written back in March)

This has given me a bit of time to reflect on my stories though and looking back at My Little Pirates, I really don't think the past few chapters have been in the spirit of one piece and have essentially been saying the same thing: they're training, and continuing on with doing that would be at least another 2 chapters of training plus some breaks to focus on the other characters.

I think the gist of what happens in the training could be said in a few paragraphs now in a latter chapter and shown in much greater detail with actual fights then just training (this isn't a Bleach crossover after all).

But I do value reader opinion as well, so leave a comment on what you think, but in all likelihood I'm going to be getting rid of a majority of the past 3 chapters and kick the plot into gear.

Comments

[Dirty Bit]

I understand where you come from completely, dude.

You needn't stress yourself too much about the direction your chapters are headed. In time, you're bound to find to work a way around it that's both appealing to yourself and your readers. As for the installment dates, that's not an issue either. No one's giving you a deadline, especially when you have a job to worry about.