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ededitsitformebecausehtyarell
assholesbutitdoesntmatterbacauseitsthefistoneandiccanusesitlikeanexcuse
beacusepeoplswillundersindthatijustneedshels
psnadtheywillloveandtoleratetheshitoutoifmebacusebroniesareperfectzans
nobadcommentsbecauseihatesthoseandiwillerasethem.
What is this I am looking at here?
It’s my new story! I just wrote it and I want everypony to look at it and love it and read it and love it and comment how great it is!”
But... it’s not even formatted!
They won’t care! I said in the summary it’s my first story and to please put constructive criticism and no bad comments!
How to use Fimfiction to format a story 
Why!? WHYYYYYYYYYYYY do haterz hate my story?! Why!?
Is this a trick question?
NO! I really don’t understand! Can’t they see that I love writing?
No. They can’t. Do you have any idea how many people use the ‘it’s my first story so please be gentle’ excuse to not even attempt to correct their grammar, spelling, etc? I mean, look at what you wrote. It’s unreadable. You ignored not only basic punctuation and capitalization; you completely disregarded formatting!
There are no line breaks.
You have dialogue from more than one character in the same paragraph.
You write things like: “clown like, I mean that you will produce work, greetings Twilight Sparkle. Actually, Spike but he is writing to Mexico. ,, But Spike was here, now I bring it!'' Said Twilight stressed.”
That goes beyond bad. That’s not writing a story, period. You can try and be cute and say it’s a trollfic, but honestly, writing a good trollfic requires more than bathing yourself in filth and rolling around on your computer to see what sticks.
But you passed my story! You approved it! That means it’s good, right?! I just had to edit it and write a bit more!
Clueless, writing this...
...to fill in for the word count is beyond moronic. Also, it’s not original. We get at least 3 a day. So yes, you had to remove that regardless and account for the three hundred words you were missing. Strictly speaking, once you replaced that with actual ‘story content’ (and I say that in the loosest of terms) you were following the rules so I passed it, but that doesn’t mean I like the pile of manure you threw at the site.
You are not the first and sadly will not be the last to pull something so ridiculously stupid. But unlike some individuals out there, you have proven that at least you can learn.
Wait... I’m not the only one to do that?
No. And honestly, it makes you look like an idiot when you do.
Okay, okay! I get it, writing “somgImsouncreative” 700 times is moronic... But, why is my story so bad?! I can read it perfectly!
You wrote the damn thing. Look, here’s another example of another, unrelated story. See how it’s formatted? See how each character’s dialogue starts in a different paragraph? See how basic rules of punctuation and capitalization are followed?
Wait... this looks familiar... heeeeeeeey! This story makes fun of all the stuff that I do and love! Why do you use it as an example?!
To hurt your feelings. Duh. I’m hoping that the impact of it will shock you into listening. Also... self-promotion and all that.
You have no shame! And no respect for my feelings! This is my first time writing! I bet you were really bad when you started!
It’s not your first time. Everyone reading this knows that. Sigh. Fine. Here.
Now, even then, as bad as it was, I did something really important with my stories, which you don’t. Can you tell me what it is?
No?
You know what? Never mind. I’ll tell you. I format the thing!
Ooooh! But... formatting is hard!
No it isn’t. In its most basic use, it is literally as simple as hitting:
Once you do that (in the right places) it allows people to not only read your story, but also to be able to suggest things you could fix instead of insta-hating your story. Not to mention make it easier for us mods and admins to read the damned thing.
If I do that, will people like my story?
Well... no, not necessarily, but at least they will be able to read it and decide if they like it or not instead of clicking on it and immediately ditching it because it’s basically unreadable. And, as it has BEEN SAID before, there’s more to writing than randomly throwing words and pony names at a word processor and submitting it.
My story has all of that! And more!
Sure it does. Okay, let’s start with the basics. For some reason you wrote the whole thing in gDocs and chose to ignore formatting or even spell checking. In fact, since you copy/pasted the text itself, you lost whatever little formatting you had. So here’s what we do: we import the doc.
Once we have the story here, you have several tools at your disposal to help you.
But let’s start by the basics and use the ‘enter key’ a few times.
Oooh... it looks so much better now! Are we done?
No. Now we separate the words.
And now?
And now, we use the tools we have. It looks here like you wanted to link a song for people to listen to while they read?
Yes!
Okay, here’s what we’ve done so far... wait... why did you underline the dialogue?
It looks cute!
It looks stupid. But, anyway. Here’s what we did...
1. We added a link to that song you wanted people to listen to while they read.
2. We added two horizontal lines since you wanted that separate from the story itself.
3. We indented the whole thing by selecting it all and clicking this...
4. We centered your “arthur’s notes”
5. & 6. We made them bold and changed the color so that people wouldn’t get confused between those and the story...
And in short, we made a desperate attempt to make something slightly readable out of what you posted! Look, we can make out words! And they should be easy to corr–
YUS! I’ll publish it now! They will see my genius!
No! Wait–
But why?!
Because formatting is just a small part of writing a story! It just makes it readable. I tried to tell you, but you wouldn’t listen. If you want people to like your work, put some effort into it. The minimum you can do is format.
Can you teach me how to write a story?
No. I don’t have the time and honestly, what little time I do have I don’t want to waste telling you what you should do and what you shouldn’t when you are capable of learning yourself. Just read books and well-written fan fiction.
Fimfiction.net gives you tools to edit and make the story look appealing, but it cannot automatically fix something that needs effort on your part. Hell, it auto-indents a doc for you. Writing a good story is completely up to you.
Oh... so... I’d better go and read a little bit... maybe copy how people format their stories?
Yes. That is what you should do before you submit this stuff again.
Thank you Wanderer D, I don’t think I could have known all of this without your help!
Yes... yes, you could. Which is what annoys me the most. Now, go... read and learn.
Yessss!
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In the name of Deleteh, go back up there and read the blog, all of you!
(Formatting is a glorious thing, is it not?)
Beautiful.
oh goody another how to bloggy *goes and reads it*
and it made me laugh again.
Well said
It's glorious.
God Damn, I love your blog posts. Have some pony.
It makes me weep tears of blood that such a post is even necessary.
JOY! Another "How To" blog!
Both informative and funny as hell. You never cease to amaze me, D
I really don't like using indentions.
I don't think it's a problem anyways.
Nice, heck this is quite good for me as im actually writing a story. Though i have written stories in the past but never published them online. For me formatting is not the issue, its how to present the story thats giving me a hard time. I got all the ideas in my head but to put them in a format where its going to be decent is the trouble.
I like this its good.
Your post about formatting broke the front page's formatting
So meta!
Oh, and on-topic, it should also be mentioned that your on-site word processor actually supports the Tab key! It's literally the only site I know of where Tab actually works as intended. Worth mentioning alongside the other tools, methinks.
That, "copy how people format their stories" makes me think that a plagiarism post isn't too far down the line.
Lovely stuff and funny to boot!
I learned something. I can change the font color. I guess that explains why there's that color wheel thingy. Suppose I should have noticed that already.
. . . But probably wouldn't have used it anyway.
*Sincerely Applauds*
yey!
Your how to blogs are great. Good for all levels of writers, as it can serve as a reminder, or advice on how to improve one's own writing.
>>234664
Not really related, but if you make an account on Steam Forums, you can use their color wheel, their font changers, like color=grey, word size, etc, though i think this is just HTML stuff
Since I don't use gdocs, I have to copy/paste and apply all the italics/bold/horizontal line tags. It can be a pain, but as a trade-off it encourages me to be smart with how I use italics, bolding, etc.
Also, I've never had to do a "select all" thing to apply paragraph indents across an entire chapter. After I paste in the text, I just hit the indent button and every paragraph (except the first one for some reason) indents automatically. Just thought I'd share
Glorious, as always.
Relating to formatting: How the devil does one write a list on Fimfiction, and make it not look like total crap? Tabulature doesn't work, and spacing doesn't scale up properly between the three sizes...
Halp?
Also, I really enjoy these things, keep up the good work. I just got slapped across the face with this problem today, so I'm freaking out a bit
>>234661
"But I was just doing you told me to Wanderer D! You told me to copy other people's stories!"
"I said to copy how they format their - you know what, forget it. You're all hopeless."
I'm so picky with my formatting, always trying to make it look pretty. I wish others would at least line space, even if they don't go the distance and use stuff like indents. :(
This reminds me, I never really thanked you for going over my first post after I asked you, it really helped, what you said, especially with my second story, and the second/third chapters of the first. So, thank you Wanderer D, for everything you do for the site, and everything you did for me! Good luck with being amazing!
Well, there's your problem WD. You started out writing Sailor Moon fanfics!
(J/K: Please don't send me to the moon!
You guys really get three of those crappy things a day?
Wow... I suddenly have a new respect for the entire FimFiction crew.
Never change wanderer.
Never change.
Exactly what I do... I read good written fan fictions and books to help. And You guys really get three of those dumb things a day?
Is he here? Okay. I need to tell PerroHambre!!
It'll make so many things easier!
Here's a fun little fact. In the bad old days before such things as paper, parchment was so expensive that paragraph breaks were just untenably extravagant and the practice of putting spaces between words just hand't been invented yet because you didn't need them so much for reading Latin*. Heck, sometimes scribes didn't even bother putting the vowels in between the constants. This made reading anything a nightmarish task. Ever wonder why reading was such a rare skill? Because it was both hard and unpleasant and involve staring at some other scribe's tiny chicken scratch script until it finally made sense. If you had money, you paid someone else to do this. Going hunting was much more fun, you see.
The moral? Format your story like a medieval document and and you shouldn't be surprised if you have to literally pay someone to read it. We live in an enlightened age of paper, paragraphs and punctuation. Take advantage.
Incidentally, how many people here know what parchment is actually made of? Perhaps you thought it was a ye-olde world word for paper? Look it up. Every episode of My Little Pony that ends with Twilight writing the moral on a piece of parchment is now grimdark.
*I just fact checked this with my friend who does medieval history and she says we have the Irish to thank for spaces. Go Ireland! Also, there were some book written for reading pleasure but there were more the exception.
Not knowing how to do links or colours, I get. Not everyone understands HTML, etc.
Being 'creative' with the speech, I get. Seen it done in published works and there are different conventions.
Two speakers in a paragraph, I get. I don't remember having the issue, but it seems to be a fairly major hurdle for learning writers (and I've had my own I'm not too proud of.)
But how the hell do people need the importance of the spacebar or enter key explained to them?
Excellent, of course. You never cease to amaze me.
Wanderer D: Doing his level best to protect YOU from the wrath of Angry Zombie Noah Webster.
I love the back and forth argument style of these
>>234677
I'm something of a formatting Nazi. Although I suppose it wouldn't hurt to use it for the title, I never use colors or italics for blocks of text. If an author thinks he needs to make a font change to set off a particular section and emphasize that it's in some way different from what's gone before, it's probably a sign that he needs to work on his transitions; it should already be clear from context that the scene is a flashback or what-have-you without recourse to fancy font changes.
>>234681
When I compose something with the express purpose of putting it on this site, I just write the tags in Microsoft Word, and then when I copy and paste, my formatting is already there. You can just surround a word with "i" (in square brackets), and it will appear in italics. "hr" is a horizontal line break . . . and I don't remember any others because those are the only codes I use.
>>234718
Pretty sure the Medievals had spaces, though I may be misremembering. I once had the privilege of seeing a Medieval University student's hand-copied Latin Bible with marginal notes. It had spaces and vowels, but it was also written with, if I remember, sixteen lines to an inch (or thereabouts). So there are other ways of saving paper without leaving out the spaces and vowels!
i love your blog posts so much
Another great 'How To' post. These are really helping me with writing.
However, I get the feeling that this post was... (dare I say it?) rushed. Just a little, as I happened to spot two errors. I know nopony's perfect ( and I'm probably gonna get some hate) but this post doesn't feel the same as the previous ones in terms of quality.
The errors were:
Third paragraph of text, there was a random dialect bracket or 'speech mark'.
Seventh paragraph of text, below the blog title, the entire block was in black when it should be green.
...there, I said it. I'm sorry Wanderer D, these blogs are really helpful, and I hope I won't get much hate for this comment.
Again tempted to post my essay on 'how to write a good description' somewhere... But one thing remains constant. You must make it LOOK like you care about what you're writing, or else (and this is best case) people will just ignore it.
>>234727 Because they've apparently have never typed anything ever. And failed English. And Smell Bad (probably not but).
Formatting question:
Say I have this line in my story, where each '_' represents a space: "The_lavender_unicorn_runs.__Run,_unicorn,_run!"
If the line breaks right after "lavender", it will look like this:
The lavender
unicorn runs. Run, unicorn, run!
But if the line breaks right after "runs.", it will look like this:
The lavender unicorn runs.
Run, unicorn, run!
(Okay, you can't see it on the chat page, but on a story page there would be a space before "Run", so the left margin is uneven.)
Is there any way of fixing this, short of joining the barbarian hordes, who separate sentences with just one space?
>>234735
Apparently they were invented early in the medieval period. As I have recently found out from my friend, they were invented to make life easier to Monks who were reading and writing Latin despite it not being there native language. Before them, the Romans didn't use them because Latin has a series of well defined word endings, so if you know your Latin it's obvious where the word ending would be.
Let me go check this again....
Me: So the Romans didn't use spaces because Latin has a system of word endings?
My friend: And because not invented yet. You don't need them as much if it is your native tonuge.
Seehowreadingthisisn'treallythathard.Annoyingbutnotimpossible
Edit: got the wrong reply tag. Corrected.
I hate when people try to use, "this is my first story" like it's going to change peoples opinions. If anything, people should be more harsh on first time writers so that they can improve their writing better.
I have luckily never read a story that I did not like the formatting in, and I actually never knew about that little google docs trick. Looks like I dont have to format my gdocs for fimfic anymore. Good to know.
>>234763
The barbarians have won. The new rule is one space between sentences. Admittedly, I can't bring myself to write this way, so I do a universal search and replace to remove all double spaces when I'm finished.
>>234718
Want to really bake your noodle? Why do the Apples have pigs on their farm?
Glorious, cutthroat, and to the point. Like an assassin's blade being plunged straight into the heart of every bad writer.
And in their dying spasms, you whisper delicately in their ear, gotcha.
I always find it strange when people say, "It's my first story, so be gentle." First, because that's like writing "DON'T READ THIS STORY!" in your description. Second, because criticism doesn't hurt as much when you're a new author. Criticism hurts when you've been writing for years and you're still not doing it right.
A blog post on how to criticize would be useful. I find that only vague criticism hurts. If someone points out something specific that they don't like, I can fix it, or learn from it, or think they're an idiot; but it only hurts if they say "This just isn't very good" without saying why.
It makes me sad you have to do these things. Anyway, thank you for your valiant efforts, Wanderer D.
I love these things, they're awesome and so informative.
I like how this actually happens...
But... it's my first story, so I should be allowed to write it like it's a text message being sent by a 15 year old. I am entitled to make these horrible mistakes, the likes of which I (should have) learned to avoid in middle school. What gives you the right to judge my story? I am a great author, but I'm also a free spirit, which means I don't have to follow the rules of writing and formatting if I don't feel like it because of how much of a special snowflake I am. My writing is unique and different and it's going to make me famous, and if people can't read it, then they just need to try harder.
Luna's plot! I think I need a shower after typing that.
>>234777
NOOOOOO!
A tl;dr version for the real Clueless Users
How to format your story
1. Put your story in "c:"
2. Type "Format c:"
3. Press enter.
That's the best thing to do for everyone.
>>234820
We need to archive all of these, "How to do _____ for idiots/noobs." Then place a link to the archive in the FAQ. Those that have failed as hard as mentioned above by WD, should be required to read the entire archive before being able to post stories again.
Just a thought.
At first, educate. And if that doesn't work...well, keep trying to educate.
There's only so much one can do when your target doesn't have an base-level education in English grammar and styles. Everyone has to start somewhere, and initiative shouldn't be killed because any of us are having a bad day while reviewing works. Kudos to those responsible for sorting through the mess of new submissions. As someone who is completely new to the scene, I can only imagine how much voluntarily work is put into maintaining this website.
Another great post. Thank you.
Hey, thank you for postin' this!
Now my story will look even better!
Ah, god I love these.... Education is rarely funny. I really do hope that people learn from these.
I think more people would use the GDocs option if it worked better. When I tried it, it either didn't work (twice) or it gave me a jumbled mess of un-formatted crap. I did not know about the auto-indent option though, that's awesome and I will be using it from now on, unless the GDocs thing is fixed since the last time I used, which was admittedly almost a month ago
Sweet! Another "How To..." from Wanderer D. Definitely going to keep this in mind.
Yeah, i've read some bad fiction in my day.. corse i remmeber when i started fan fic writting myself.
I've come a long way since, in fact i've been planing to make a fiction of things i've seen and heard of that people and I hate. I planned to make it so awesomly bad it would be an Art. Like one thing i've seen from one writter.. Basicly a person but-hurt about people supposedly calling galacion weak.l put it in pony form...bad grammar and everything
"OMG are you are earthpony wariour?"
"Yes, i am the best warrior around by miles!"
"Oh good cause i am to, some people say earthponies are weak, easily beat by unicorns"
"That's dumb i eat weak dumb unicorns for brefast!"
"I know right i know I am earthpony and i am strong!"
Wait, it get's better,
"Discord, terror of all land we've been hunting down the whole story who beat celestia, prepare for doomination!"
"Oh please how can the stupid weak patheic noone-loves-them earthponys beat me?"
"Formation!"
Earthpony 1 used LOCK ON,
EarthponyTEAM used Quick Buck!
Critical hit! It's supper effetive!
"NOOOOOOOOOO"
Discord dies the end deal with it.
...Yeah, i've seen crap. By both others and myself.
"YOu to have had you life like this!"
"Umm... why?"
"BECAUSE!...umm... to build character?"
"F you."
This one my suckyness
And sadly, as I know from experience, this will change nothing.
But at least I got to laugh, right?
And yet another of the Wanderer's god-level posts goes wandering about the wasteland, ignored by those feeble writers that stumble upon its genius.
These how to's are always pretty funny.
They're probably significantly less so for the actual site mods who have to deal with real people acting like that.
>>234718
Yay to the Irish! I'm even more proud of my Irish heritage now.
Someone made Wander so upset that he had to make a blog about it.
How could you censor such beauty?
Why!? WHYYYYYYYYYYYY do haterz hate my story?! Why!? ....
You formatted it wrong
Shouldn't it be green? 
The irony
Other than that it was informative while being hilarious.
Actually, you hit enter twice or else it looks like crap.
It makes me feel self conscious. I just posted my first story, ever, on Fimfiction a few weeks ago, and I did say "first fanfiction", etc. Though, when I say that, It means I'm wanting helpful criticism to properly structure my work. I'd rather hear "you need to change how you post your dialogue" than "yer story sucks, "f*** off you noob".
*looks around nervously*
For every dozen of illeritage scrawlning hak-n-skalsh writrs, there is one tiny little Fluttershy type, who has been writing and writing and writing for years but never had the nerve to show it to *anybody*.
That's me. I've been working on a Fantasy-Swords-and-Sorcery novel for *twenty* years, and with all the re-writes and start-overs, I've got about a half-dozen chapters. On the hard drive. Never shown.
And then there were Ponies. And I went from "Oh God, some of these are horrible, I can do better than that" to "Well, I wrote my first fanfic, I'll just save it on my hard drive and never show anybody in the world" to "I'm about to hit the 'Publish' button on Fimfiction" in THREE DAYS. Scared the *censored* out of me.
So feel free to encourage the newbies, help them with their spelling, grammar, storylines, dialogue, plot, theme, background, and all the other things that come with writing. Who knows, there may be another Bujold or Pratchett out there, Or Georg. :)
You win again.
>>234943
The Answer:
Im guessing that's the reason why...I really don't know
This reminds me how I chose not to write a "zomg first story" comment in my summary. I'll save the self deprecation for a blog post if people actually care to read it. Way I see it, the cover page of a story shouldn't be a written apology from the writer. When a doctor puts you under for surgery, do you want the last words you hear to be "hey kid this is my first operation so don't criticize okay?" I didn't think so.
Is it wrong to lol?
No?
OK then, LOl!
>>234943 This is me in a nutshell.
And also, why does it take someone famous to finally start talking about this issue for people to get it? And one last thing, yeah, about the whole "this is my first time writing so please be gentle" business; yeah, not happening cupcakes, better saddle your shit n' clean up your act or I will lodge my critic's up your story's ass and use the steel toed edge to dig around until I can pull the good bits out (along with my foot)
Great resource. Now if only more authors would actually follow it instead of having the old "I'm a new author, please be gentle!" shtick.
I mean, my own first work had nothing of the sort, and I think it was received fairly well simply because I didn't write like a fucking idiot.
I always do the stuff here, but read over it in case I have made a glorious mistake in writing. All clear for now though.
I'm going to take this moment to state how much I love you, and all of the other mods/admins. You and they keep this site from becoming another dick-waggling contest like 4chan or a bile worthy Fanfiction.net knock off.
Sometimes I think you guys are keeping this part of the fiction alive, and I applaud you all greatly for your efforts.
TL;DR: I FUCKING LOVE YOU ALL SO MUCH IN THE LEAST GAY WAY POSSIBLE UNLESS YOU'RE EITHER FEMALE OR INTO THATAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I find these posts highly amusing, and saddening at the same time. Amusing because your sense of humour is similar to mine, and saddening because, regardless of mind-dumbingly simple tutorials, this continues to happen.
Also, I write all my work in Open Office, so I have everything right there, then, I just copy and paste! Thank you Wanderer D, for yet another hilarious post that causes me to lose even more faith in humanity! 
>>234642
Aaaand now I'm having flashbacks to My Immortal. Whee.
Admins. Make a single post, stating the dumbest things that stupid people think they can post "Getting around" the posting rules, or just tell them that if they are going to be a smart ass about it, they'll be temp banned. Fixes every issue, I say.
>>234778 I can't remember where, but one of the folks who works on the show actually addressed this when questions arose soon after The Showstoppers aired. I can't for the life of me remember what the explanation was because it was so long ago and I didn't really pay it much mind at the time, but I believe there was a somewhat similar explanation for the cows, with a difference being that the cows paid for their rent by providing dairy products (which is a much more obvious explanation I guess than whatever it was for the pigs).
>>234833 If only. It's sad, but many of the offenders I've seen first hand actually are native English speakers with an at least partial high school education. I would say they've had every opportunity for their basic foundation in English writing, but also having read some of my classmate's papers back then, it really is shocking how bad some of these folks manage to be. It really is depressing how much the American public school system has failed most us. I was lucky to have had very good teachers in middle school (we had parts of the MLA handbook pretty much drilled into us before we graduated) before coming to High School, where the teachers I ended up with were also very good, but many of my classmates were entirely unprepared for our teacher Freshman year, who was a super strict grader and super demanding.
Of note, Suomibrony ("First Pony View") is Finnish, and even though English is his second language, his written English is better than most native speakers' I've come across.
>>234957 I do hope "illeritage scrawlning hak-n-skalsh writrs" was a joke, because it just made my head hurt with the complete absence of any actual words in any language that I am aware of (and not in the good way like with Dr. Seuss). As for the rest of your comment, I can only say that if you showed your work to more people, you could have had more help by now to avoid some of the comparatively minor grammatical and syntactic errors that I spotted throughout your post. If you don't submit your work for feedback, how will you ever be able to improve? You're taking a very important step forward by submitting your first piece for public viewing.
>>234642 Here.
Oh CU why you so bad at writing? Your level of bad at this is awe inspiring.
Also the fact that this post was even needed makes me want to cry.
That's a lot of green. You had to click the color button a lot :O
At least this guy is willing to listen and improve, rather than one of those who think they are the best and never stop thinking they are the best even though they are utterly terrible and barely readable.
It does really make me shed a tear (which is almost impossible for me) that blog posts like these should even be made. They should be made to help new people, not to try and help the ignorant idiots.
>>234681
To help speed that process up I just write in the HTML itallics/bold/horizontal line tags when I write the story. They're really small and easy to do so it doesn't disrupt my writing at all. Thought I could mention that if you think it'll cut off that extra step
>>234718
Maybe that's what the sheep Applejack keeps are used for
>>234955 Don't worry. Unless you said "It's my first story so please be nice" or even "It's my first story so please rate and favorite!" you should be fine.
Usually how you react to criticism shows if you're a new writer seeing to grow or a Clueless User.
>>235036
Well said.
I love it so much when these entries are both snarky and educational. It's such a nice mixture. Thank you for writing this.
>>234749 Glad I'm not the only one these help out. Now for four hours of dialogue corrections.
>>234773 I agree. I always ask for feedback, and it's the people who are harsh that I value most. I can't improve without them.
All the pics seems to be giving me a 403 error for some reason.
EDIT: I think it might have something to do with me being in France.
Holy shit. I was just raging about this the other day. It's like Wanderer D read my mind :O
Hopefully this will nudge some new writers hard enough to get their act together >.<
I'm glad I just read these for the chuckles and not for the actual learning! Yea, but some stories are good even if the do the 'WALL OF TEXT!' but it annoys me slightly. So my question is this: Does he do this for the actual purpose pr for the lols?
Wanderer D should be a teacher. The dude makes learning hilarious.
By God, this is hilarious. Wanderer D makes every other teachers's teaching methods look like shit.
Very nice. But this doesn't supply my Sweetiecrack habit...
Great as always WD! *salute*