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Aragem 32115

Joined April 2012
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    Aragem's Stories (3)

    • Red Comet
      Twilight Sparkle sees a strange red comet that brings ill tidings to Equestria.

      27,163 words · 734 views · 32 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Jammin' Gemini
      Ponyville prepares for Winter Welcome, but two guest arrive who aren't what they seem.
      70,448 words · 439 views · 21 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Destination Darkness
      Events take place that will change Equestria forever
      31,118 words · 351 views · 18 likes · 2 dislikes
    Jul
    8th
    2012

    I added Slice of Life as a category because thinking it over, there are far more slice of life moments than there are for adventure. Not doing it to get more readers ( which would be AWESOME), but to better fit the story.  

    And I have a better grasp of the following plot for this Book.  By my guesstimation, Jamming Gemini may be concluded after five more chapters, then we'll be onto Book 3.

    The reason why I am not exactly sure is because I want events to flow together and not feel rushed or choppy.  That means that often a chapter is longer than I expected or the chapter I'm writing ends up becoming two chapters.  

    Also, I am taking extremes to make sure that I keep our wonderful Pony characters in character.  Which is why I try to write after watching an episode with the character's mannerisms firmly in my mind, especially if a scene is centered on Applejack or Twilight Sparkle for example.  

    I have big plans for the following books and I'm going to need reviews and comments to keep me on track and point out any mistakes or errors.  Because I am hoping that maybe one day I can get this on Equestria Daily.  But I understand more work needs to go into it before then.

    Once Jamming Gemini concludes, I'm going to go back over Red Comet and make some revisions.  Nothing to change to the plot, but to make the story more detailed and descriptive.  

      

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