I dun goof'd

Judging by the huge number of comments I've received on the subject, it looks like I've royally messed up with Part Five. This is going to take some work on my part, but I'm going to set this right. I should have been more considerate of Twilight's character, and given her a definitive reason for her actions. In my rush to tell my story the way I wanted, I overlooked some very critical details.

So, dear readers, here is my promise: I will do my very best to fix Part Five, and I will make damn sure I do my story justice.

And I'm sorry. I should have done more to keep this from happening. But, life goes on, and I've (hopefully) learned my lesson.

Comments

[Starfall]

I think that that's for the best - please don't take that the wrong way though, I want to see the story be the best it can possibly be!

Perhaps Twilight could be more confused than angry? Clueless Twilight frustrating Rarity so much that she runs away in heartbreak could work.

[TheLaughingColt]

I must admit that I was a little displeased with part five, but the fact that you are willing work on your errors shows that you really do care about your story. I like where the story is headed and I'm excited to see how part five is changed and the how rest of the story will wrap up.

[The G&P Tea]

As stated, I was a bit disappointed in part 5 it but I congratulate that you are willing to fix it and work on errors. We all make mistakes and I am certainly no exception that is for sure. Other than that, I really do love the story and really cant wait to see where it goes! Cheers to you JKinsley! and I figure I will mimc the other comments by leaving one of these: