Work In Progress · 11:53am Nov 26th, 2014
Good morning, Of Horses And Whorses readers!
I am currently working on the next chapter of the story, but there is something else that I need to address. While going over previous chapters I noticed that, while I edited the story to change the way the Mane Six spoke of Zecora, the zebra herself still speaks as though they still fear her.
That said, I need to change this — but as you all know, I hate coming up with dialogue for Zecora. So I was thinking that I could rewrite the scene where 'you' first meet Zecora, but make her speech sound normal (in other words, with no rhyming).
Then, one of you could look over it and change it to sound more in character.
If this sounds like something you'd be interested in helping with, please leave a comment. I should point out that it will be a case of 'first come, first served.' EDIT: Alticron will be helping me with this.
Thanks again for all your patience with this — your support is greatly appreciated. Also, I'm hoping to make the story at least ten chapters long. And given that I'm working on Chapter Six... well, we've got a long journey ahead of us yet!
I could do that for you, I did that for other stories before.
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Thanks. I'll let you know when I need your services.
2617577 I'll be waiting.
You're going to have a chapter where Zayna goes into heat, aren't you? Not even a cloppy chapter, but just one where she keeps whining about being sooooooo horney at embarrassing moments. 'Cause, y'know, I can't see her not being vocal about how uncomfortable she is.
(Bonus points if the stallion of her interest overhears her complaining to her "master" about how horney she is and takes it the wrong way.)
2617668 Not speaking from experience, but once you realize you have a voice and can complain... Suddenly all the frustrations come out!