A Broken Heart.... · 11:50pm Oct 29th, 2014
The teen shook her head. “No, Mom, this isn’t your fault. But I already know what’s in it, and frankly, I don’t want to go.” A rare look of anger and disgust crossed the usually-placid teen’s face as she said, “I want nothing to do with him.”
“Flutters, he’s your father,” Posey told her daughter. “You should give him a chance.”
“No. I’ll admit, I have great memories of when I was just a kid. But when he left us – and for a stupid, selfish re—”
A severe look crossed Posey’s face, an equally unusual visage for the doctor. “Fluttershy, this is your father you’re talking about. Regardless of how you feel about him, he deserves your respect, understood?”
“No, no I don’t,” Fluttershy replied, “but, fine.” The look on her face agitated, she said, “I think I’m going to have breakfast out, Mom. I’ll be back before you leave.” Before Posey could even react, the teen had raced to the door, grabbed her keys, and by the time Posey had even managed to reach the door, Fluttershy’s butter-yellow Nissan Leaf rushed down the street.
Oh Redding. It's so weird having a story take place in one's hometown.
...
That street looks incredibly familiar...
andwhydoihavetowaitamonthicantwaitthatlongthestoryistoogood..
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Absence makes the heart grow fonder?
I lived there! For a good meeeeh 10 years. Then I moved... to the country!
Anyway IT'S COMING HEHEHE!
EqG fic?
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Book III of said fic.
Book I is here: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/179932/seven-days-in-sunny-june-book-i
Book II is here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/187558/seven-days-in-sunny-june-book-ii
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I'll take that as an yes, oh and welcome to the Sunset Shimmer group
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Thanks!
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You're welcome
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*Slowly raises a knife* Back to your typewriter..
Welp, she's pissed!
Hide, everyone!
Cannot wait to see what goes down in Canterlot! I'll be along for the ride! All of it!
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You do realize if I go all Faulkner like that, you're never going to see it, right? Typewriters don't connect to the internet very well.
2563004 Back to your Microsoft-Word-connected Typewriter...
*Slowly approaches with the knife*
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But what if I'm using Word Perfect? Or Google Docs? Or Zoho Office? Or Libre Office? Or any of a dozen other programs?
2563053 Back. To. Your. Microsoft-Word. Connected. Typewriter.
*slowly brings the knife closer to your face*
*The knife is obviously made of string cheese, now that it is so close*
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Regular or Armenian? I like the Armenian - it's smoked.
2563091 BACK TO YOUR TYPEWRITER!
*Pokes repeatedly in the eye with the string-cheese knife*
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But if you blind me, how can I write?
2563121 I AM ONLY STABBING ONE EYE!
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Yes, but that's why humans are born with two. If only one is used, exhaustion sets in and prevents people from using visual acuity. Blurry vision, need for glasses, that sort of stuff.
2563147 YOU WILL ONLY NEED ONE EYE TO WRITE.
*Continues to stab the eye*
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But what if I become blind in the other eye? Then you'll forever be known as the person who ruined the story for everyone.
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BURN THE HERETIC.
2563191 THEN I SHALL GIVE YOU A ROBOT EYE.
*Continues to stab the eye with string cheese*
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And if it doesn't work?
2563253 IT WILL WORK. ROBOTS ARE AWESOME.
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Ever seen The Terminator, Metropolis, or the like?
2563271 DO YOU NOT WANT TO BE A CYBORG.
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It's hopless, not even the power of my cyber weasles(tm) can get him to write.
as AAG sits alone, unlove ,unupdated. like the little match girl by Hans Christen Anderson
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...psh, cyborgs get all the chicks.
Huh, I have family in Redding and I worked in an Ice Cream Shop there last summer. Best Ice Cream in town (even if it is the only real ice cream in town).
Yknow, just as an aside about this, this is inherently wrong.'
For one thing, respect is always earned, never given. Not even being a child's parents automatically gives them respect; after all, they could be intentionally or unintentionally abusive. Posey already looks misguided at best if she's trying to force respect out of Flutters (and Flutter's has the right idea so far without reason to believe her daddy's different).
on-topic, BLAARRGH WAITING ONE MONTH IS HARD BLAARRGH! (I guess I'll just re-read all this, Powers of Harmony, and Harmony Theory.)
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Have to agree with you there. One can show politeness to an individual without showing respect. Though if you can somehow integrate Rainbow Rocks into this continuity considering how Hendersoned you did in Book I, that's going to be interesting as hell.
2562941 Damn, didn't noticed book II has been completed
A month. A whole month to wait before book three begins....
I guess that gives me plenty of time to finally sit down an watch Equestria Girls.