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2012

Da Next One Part II · 12:07am Jun 19th, 2012

So we have officially hit 2,500 people at least looking at chapter one in "A Ghost Story" so I think that deserves recognition.

With the amount of replies to my last blog post I have decided on going with first person.

Now onto my next questions for the upcoming story. Should I attempt shipping with the main character? Just shipping no clop (I have nothing against clop, I just don't think I can pull that off as a writer).

Leave a comment with your thoughts.

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Well, it depends. If it's the mane six....you are already treading very dangerious ground there.....hard to pull that off without the story immediately having signed off on having one of the biggest cliches of HiE. However, you could pull a fast one and date a character like, say, Ditzy or Lyra, or another popular background character. You'd be on safer ground there, as I think human x Background character ships are actually surprisingly rare, or at least not well-known. Also, the hi-risk of having the character date in the first place....you'll have to explain the passing of a bunch of boundaries, which is where I've seen many human x pony shippings screw up. All in all, it depends on who you ship with, and how you explain it as being plausible.

181958 It would most likely be a background pony. I have two reasons for this. First off, as you pointed out, the main six are incredibly cliche and I love to be original. Secondly, I prefer a pony that isn't as well defined in the show so I can play around with their personality and character development.

181940

Well that sums up my thoughts, time for me to hit the ol dusty trail! Seriously though(from here on out, this message is for Elemist) , I think if you want to ship the main character, go ahead and do so. Personally, I was hoping our ghost friend in your current story was going to be shipped with Lyra, and it was slightly disappointing when the story line proved otherwise.

I do not exactly know how well you can write a ship fic(as I see you have not done it before, at least on FIMfiction), you need to put a lot of thought into how to portray the feelings of the characters so that the audience can empathize and feel emotion from both the actions of the characters, and the direction of the plot. I do think you can do that though, given enough planning and thought(I am unsure how you go about writing a story, so I am just assuming you plan things out a bit). As a certain mask salesman once said "have faith". Good luck in your writing! I look forward to more chapters of "A Ghost Story" as well as your new up and coming story!

181964
Hmm....I think you should go for it, then. I agree with the undefined part, as well. It allows for SO much more freedom.

Random note: It also occurs to me that the one ship I've never seen (At least seriously and not as a joke) would be with a human being shipped with Celestia or Luna. Well, unless there was a story where a human turned into a gary/mary stu/sue alicorn, but I never read those stories if I can help it.

181975 I am incredibly tempted to do a human/zecora but I don't think I could do the dialogue for that, at least not long term.

do it.

i want twilight and spooky relationship. if you add that then this story has absolute everything.

OBS!!! this is only my opinion. you take this story where ever you want, when ever you want, in the way YOU want

that being said i want it but follow your own artistic gut feeling

181984
Ouch, the constant rhyming. Unless you explained that she actually doesn't rhyme all the time, but that it is more of a habit than anything else. She can easily talk normally, but the rhyming reminds her of her homeland.

Do Ship Zecora if you want. Fimfiction NEEDS more Zecora shipping. And as Bronymaster says, she dosent need to rhyme all the time. Just sometimes. I vote for Zecora shipping :rainbowdetermined2:
i bet she would be interesting to ship.
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Lunar Justice

I don't think I've ever seen a Human x Celestia before.

*Grins evilly*
Step 1. Ship with Trixie:trixieshiftleft:
step 2. ???:ajbemused:
step 3. Hilarity ensues:pinkiecrazy:

... Well, let the rage begin...

I'm gonna go with a no to shipping.

I think a ghost having a sexual relationship with a living pony is just going to feel weird. If you could find a pony ghost, it would probably feel more natural, well supernatural hehe (see, they're ghosts, so SUPERnatural? no? nevermind...)

That said, I will respect and support your choice on the matter regardless of what it might be, and will continue to track and read this magnificent, marvelous masterpiece (alliteration, yay!)

199654 Sorry, I should have mentioned this in the blog post, this is questions for my next fic, not for a Ghost Story.

199658
OH! well that just makes me feel stupid then :twilightblush: "upcoming story" really should have been a dead giveaway now that I read over the blog again...

In that case i urge you to try shipping if you feel comfortable with it, I'm a sucker for a good romance story, and I really think you could pull it off without it being cliché :twilightsmile:

Anyway, disregard my previous comment and carry on!

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