Looking for proofreaders

I wrote some things. I think they're all pretty well polished already, but second and third opinions can't do anything but help. They look like this:

I wrote this for that Most Dangerous Game Contest from forever ago, and then missed the deadline spectacularly.

I wrote this for the FlutterDash contest. But I missed that deadline, too, because apparently I suck at deadlines.

I wrote this for fun. Yippee!

If you'd be interested in reading any of these and giving me some feedback, leave a comment. I'll send you a link to a GDoc.

Comments

[LoneUnicornWriter]

Yeah, I'll take a swing.

[Derpamena]

I have time, I'll take a look

[ScousePone]

Bruh

[Endorb]

The most dangerous proofreading, if you'd please

[pterrorgrine]

I wish I had the time to commit to prereading these (and I'll offer, if you're okay with zero reliability), but these all look mad dankophonic.

[Titanium Dragon]

I'll take a look at the FlutterDash one, if you'd like, but I probably won't get around to it until sometime later next week (as I'm planning on hitting all the write-off fics, and I have another person who I committed to reading something over for which is 10k words right now) so if you need it sooner than that, it is unlikely I'll be helpful.