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Invictus 323125

Joined December 2011
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    Invictus's Stories (3)

    • Magic, and Mayhem, and... Murder? Oh my...
      Shawn Spencer, fake psychic detective, goes where no man has gone before.

      126,925 words · 4,870 views · 588 likes · 18 dislikes
    • Pip
      Pipsqueak learns a valuable life-lesson
      2,042 words · 1,100 views · 142 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Angel
      How Angel met Fluttershy
      3,075 words · 1,478 views · 72 likes · 1 dislikes
    Jun
    15th
    2012

    As much as I hate to do it, I'm going to have to delay it until Monday afternoon.

    I know I promised you guys an update today, and I tried (I really did). Work, though, has made that all but impossible. Not without rushing and giving up the already-minute quality I try to preserve in my writing. I'll admit it... I got a little over-ambitious with that last announcement.

    However, I would like to note that this does not in any way affect my resolution to bring you guys 3 chapters a month. There will be another chapter posted, besides this next one, before June is through.

    Still, I has bad feels. As an apology, here, have a teaser:

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    "Say," Shawn started, "something seem off to you?"

    Pinkie floated, stock still except for her wings, which buzzed away, "What? Besides the fact that the aggressively rebellious daughter of the city's most powerful smuggler was last seen in the bar of its most infamous information dealer? And that both of them have ties to, and motivation to hate, the shadowy criminal overlord that rules its seedy underbelly with an iron hoof? And that the building's upside down?"

    Shawn took a moment to mull that over, "Huh... I was actually going to say it's real quiet for an early evening at a bar. And you're the one upside down." A gentle push at the mare's head set her spinning on her axis.

    "Wheeeeeeeeee! Now it's right side up! Now it's sideways! Now it's upside down again! Now its sideways the other way!"

    The choice of whether to head inside the bar or stick around and listen to the narration of Pinkie's slow spin was an easy one.

    Feeling bold, and more than a little tired of retracing his steps, Shawn kicked the swinging wooden door open and stepped in, "Hey, Softy! I need to ask you... a... question..."

    It had taken a moment for his eyes to adjust to the dimness of the pub. But now, he could see that his shadow stretched across the length of the dirty, straw-covered floor and came to rest upon the gold-shod hooves of a very surprised captain of the Canterlot Royal Guard.

    "Huh..."

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    Comments ( 5 )

    #1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·
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    That was the wrong choice, Shawn. It's far more interesting to watch Pinkie spin in a circle.

    #2 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>176260

    Lets be fair now, after being with Pinkie for a full day, I would personally be slamming my face into the nearest wall. Maybe that's just me though...

    #3 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>176351 Let's be fair now, if I found out you had spent a whole day with Pinkie Pie and didn't invite me along, I would personally be slamming your face into the nearest wall. Maybe that's just me though...:pinkiecrazy:

    #4 · 48w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>179378

    This fandom scares me sometimes...

    #5 · 48w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>179794 sorry I couldn't pass that up. In all honesty i'd rather spend a day with Twilight Sparkle:twilightsmile:

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