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    RBDash47's Stories (2)

    • PONY Legacy
      Rainbow Dash is accidentally transported to the Grid, where she finds that friends may be enemies.

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    • Old Friends
      She noticed the pony for the first time when she was young, not long after she'd received her cutie mark. He became her oldest friend.
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    Jun
    15th
    2012

    Originally posted to the Vault on 12/30/11.

    We resume our regularly-scheduled pony reading with our first Comedy entry. Keep an eye out for subtle allusions to both historical figures and one of the best comic fantasy authors of our day.

    [Comedy] • 8,500 words

    Luna decides to work on her Element of Laughter. The Commander of the Lunar Guard gives chase.

    Hit the title for a few more well-turned words from Cloud Wander, and links to Tonight I Shall Be Laughter on the ponynet. Check out the Vault's Downloads page for an eBook that works for you!

    Pony Fiction ArchiveFIMFictionEquestria Daily

    Where do you live?

    San Diego, California.

    What kind of work do you do? (i.e. are you a student, do you have a career/day job, etc)

    Database administrator, programmer. (I've worked in a number of fields; currently, I'm in education.)

    How did you discover My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic? When did you realize you were a fan of the show?

    A thread on MetaFilter brought the current generation of MLP to my attention. After reading Lauren Faust's comments about her goals for the series (girl-positive, smart-positive), I took a look at an episode or two in YouTube.

    I can't stress enough how much Faust's essay on her goals for MLP influenced my decision to watch. I understood her impatience with the lack of girl-positive programming. I had little prior knowledge of the MLP universe, but her essay compelled me to learn more, not just about the current generation of MLP, but of the generations that came before.

    I decided I enjoyed this show when, half-way through The Ticket Master, I realized I actually wanted to know how Twilight resolved this issue with her friends. From that point, there was no looking back.

    Here's how I've described this to others: suppose you suddenly found a cache of classic Warner Bros cartoons. From the "golden age" of Chuck Jones and Mike Maltese. Suppose they offered you a window into their world. Wouldn't you like to come inside, look around and make new friends?

    Do you have a favorite episode?

    Troubling. I point new viewers to Winter Wrap-Up, but my favorite is Suited for Success. While watching this episode, I finally "got" Rarity and realized that she and I are not so very different. The homage to Sunday in the Park with George is just icing on the cupcake.

    An embarrassing admission: I did not, initially, like Rarity at all. I assumed that she would be the "mean girl", the oh-don't-hate-me-because-I'm-beautiful character. I am astounded by how wrong I as. After the Suited for Success episode, I felt I understood her completely. For all of our differences, she is very much like me.

    Who is your favorite character based purely on the canon of the show itself? Would your answer change if you considered the fandom in its entirety (i.e. art, fanfiction, memes, etc)?

    Ha ha! For the longest time, I couldn't decide on a favorite! Right now, it's Twilight Sparkle, because she is so much like the daughter I wish I had.

    (Have you see the PMV "The Stars Will Aid In Her Escape"? Watching this, I understood why I love Twilight: she has courage of the heart. In real life, I would be privileged to be her friend.)

    How did you come up with your handle/penname?

    It started with Monty Python's "Airline Pilot" sketch. I was trying to come up with the pegasus equivalent of "Bob" and I wondered what some simple pegasus parents would think of. "Let's call her... I dunno, 'Sky'." "It's a boy, dear." "Okay... how about 'Cloud'?"

    "Cloud Wander" comes from Wordsworth, obviously: "I wandered lonely as a cloud."

    Have you written in other capacities (other fandoms, professionally, etc)? When did you first start writing?

    I've written, previously, in RPG journals and drew a humorous comic strip that was well-received by the fan community. That was long ago, however. I have returned to "the herd" but newly.

    What do you like to do when you're not writing?

    Reading. A good writer is, first, a good reader.

    I can't stress this enough.

    Who is your favorite author (published or fanfiction)? Do you have a favorite story or novel?

    Terry Pratchett is who I want to be when I grow up. My favorite story is (long version) "The Lord of the Rings", (short version) "The Case of Charles Dexter Ward".

    The thing that both have in common, now that I think of it, is that both are mindful of the point-of-view of the narrator. One of the main weaknesses I see in other's writing is that they are "describing a movie," rather than getting down into the heads of their primary characters.

    Stephen King believes that every author has an "ideal reader" - the one person who they write for, the one person whose reactions they care about. Do you have one, and if so, who is it?

    I write for my teenage self, the boy I was at 14, who was desperate for escape.

    Do you have any tips for aspiring writers, or writers who are struggling with their own stories?

    Read. Write. Do the first extensively, and think about the "why" and "what" of the authors you like. For the second, have confidence in yourself and write without fear.

    What is your typical writing process? (Do you work through multiple drafts, do you have any prereaders/editors, etc?)

    What works for me is to just sit and write without concern for the outcome. OK, maybe a story will emerge, but, if not, at least some bits and pieces will be produced that might be useful later. Over time, I've learned to have confidence that whatever I write, there will be something there worth reading.

    What inspired you to write Tonight I Shall Be Laughter?

    Equestria Daily's "Happy Luna" competition.

    To expand on this a bit: the story was written over two weekends and was constrained by the rules of the challenge ("Happy Luna", "socks", etc.). While this was a challenge, it was also helpful, in that it forced me to restrict my story to what I could accomplish within the time constraints.

    Did you run into any tough spots or challenges when writing Tonight I Shall Be Laughter?

    The biggest problem was structuring the story so that Princess Luna and Captain Bucephalus had "equal" roles. In the end, I think Luna had the strongest story, emotionally, while Bucephalus had the most "action".

    When you set out to write Tonight I Shall Be Laughter, did you have any specific messages or themes in mind?

    When I set out, no. Looking back, I'm struck by how urgent it was that both characters get out of the Tower, the dull, dead-end lives that they had lived until then. This is why I said, above, "have confidence in your writing." You may discover unexpected qualities in what you write. Goodness knows, I have.

    Where can readers drop you a line?

    km32215@gmail.com.

    Is there anything else you'd like to add?

    The truest thing I ever wrote:

    “Bill, let me tell you something: you, me, Blue, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna, Twilight Sparkle, Spike, Sweetie Belle and all the folk down in Ponyville, all the earth ponies and the pegasus ponies and the unicorn ponies, the kelpies and the cuddlefish, we all began with nothing more than this: once upon a time.

    “In a world like this, like Equestria, a story is a very powerful thing. Maybe the most powerful thing there is.

    “So if you tell a story out loud, and if you believe in it, well, maybe the world will listen and like your story better than the one it has, and the world will believe you, too. And follow you.

    “Bill, if you believe you have a chance to be a unicorn, then I’d be a foal to bet against you.”

    This is from "The Shadow Over Ponyville", the second story I submitted to Equestria Daily.

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    Comments ( 19 )

    #1 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Story time again! I'll go check it out now.

    #2 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Yay new post :D

    #3 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    A good writer is, first, a good reader.

    I can't agree any more with that.:twilightsmile:

    You won't believe how many people write stories, and their estimated words read are below 50.000.

    I know it may not count towards the quality of the fic, but reading helps. A LOT!

    Also, it's good to see a Comedy author get the spotlight.

    I wish that someone interviews me someday, but before that I, need to add some more clowns to my own fic. :rainbowlaugh:

    ...

    Figuratively speaking of course...

    #4 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>175902

    To be fair, there's plenty of non-fimfiction things out there that can be read for the same purposes of improving writing.

    #5 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>176016

    Exactly! That's why I said that it doesn't matter to the quality of the fic.

    Hay, I read Fallout Equestria 2X on Google Docs!

    And I still can't right to save my life. :rainbowlaugh:

    #6 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>176021

    I've been reading all my life and I have yet to write something that I like.

    #7 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>176026

    Same here, but my problem really is the language.

    I am fluent in English and Portuguese, but I can't still get all the tiny meanings, innuendos and other stuff that most people say without thinking.

    But that's what you get, I learned English on my own, I never had a score below 19/20 or 5/5 in School. But you can only go so far. :pinkiesad2:

    Who would have thought that by reading pony fanfiction, I would have learned so much XD

    #8 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>176021

    >And I still can't right to save my life.

    Irony is a cruel mistress, TheXIIILightning. :twilightsmile:

    #9 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>176033

    I know, right? Ponies are awesome :yay:

    #10 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #11 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh man, that quote from Shadow over Ponyville. I remember that fic, and I remember all the interactions between those ponies. So good.

    Tonight I shall be Laughter is excellent stuff too. Solid writer, this.

    #12 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Okay, this was a pleasant surprise. A confession:

    I've been struggling to write all my life, since my early teens. And, oh, how I hated it! The blank paper, the stupid, clumsy words! Awkward syntax! Lifeless characters! I wanted to be the best writer ever, to tell it all, and become rich off the rewards! So why is this horrible stuff, coming out of me?

    (Too much information: I started by writing Star Trek fan fiction, and, later, some Elfquest stories. Some of the latter were published. Well done, that fan!)

    Only now, in this community, have I learned love and tolerance for myself. I write now mainly for my own pleasure. If other ponies like my work, then well done! But even if nopony "favorites" my story, it doesn't matter. I had the joy of writing it. Or, rather, the joy of discovering it, in me. And that is the best thing of all.

    #13 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>176268

    >I write now mainly for my own pleasure. If other ponies like my work, then well done! But even if nopony "favorites" my story, it doesn't matter. I had the joy of writing it. Or, rather, the joy of discovering it, in me. And that is the best thing of all.

    This is true wisdom.

    Also, hi again!

    #14 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Well that was another good post. Glad I was able to read it

    #15 · 48w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Ah, I remember helping judge for the Happy Luna Contest, and boy were there some good entries. Tonight I Shall Be Laughter, though... well, there's a reason it won first, haha. It was an incredibly good story, filled with great characters and good natured humor. Midnight Shadow said it best: I wish it were an episode.

    #16 · 48w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Pssst. Pick something other than yellow to use as your tag.

    I'm now going blind.

    #17 · 48w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>180113

    Yellow's what EqD and the Vault proper use for Comedy... admittedly not this shade, but there are only so many choice available in FIMFic's color picker.

    #18 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I'll be damned! Another San Diego brony. Seems there aren't too many of those.

    #19 · 47w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>176268 Ahh sounds just like the story of my life. I remember how I used to be horrible at writing to the point where just thinking about it was a poison in my mind. However as the years went along I progressively got better at it, this community has given me a purpose to write and as I enter my senior year of high school at the end of this summer I look back and see how far I have come in writing. That being said I will try my best to begin writing what I want to write, thank you for the words of wisdom Cloud.

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