• EAsylum
    When Twilight Sparkle went to bed, she had friends she loved and a life she enjoyed. But she awoke to hospital gowns and padded restraints. And the doctors, they keep telling her that she is sick and none of it was real. They’re lying, right?
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  • 142 weeks
    Please

    Please get vaccinated. That is all.

    -Derek (aka DoD)

    I might have something to share at the end of the month. Maybe.

    19 comments · 1,120 views
  • 157 weeks
    So I finally published a new story

    It's my first attempt at a romance story. And the cover art was done by the amazing Jaestring!

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    4 comments · 870 views
  • 208 weeks
    Looking For Editing Help

    Sorry for the bother,

    I was looking for some editing help on my stories, including the next chapter of Asylum, and I was also looking for some feedback on the stories in general to help me nail down some pernicious issues I've been facing.

    Please PM me if you're willing and able to help. And let me offer my thanks ahead of time, because I do appreciate it all!

    Sincerely,
    Derek (aka DoD)

    14 comments · 1,417 views
  • 235 weeks
    I have a gift for you - the lost Asylumverse planning guide (from 2013!)

    So, years ago I actually started writing out a guide of random but mostly useless information about Asylum and Broadhoof after I received permission from folks to write fan-fiction based on my fan-fiction. It was a humbling but invigorating experience. So in my exuberance, I decided that I should craft something that would help provide the reader a more coherent world for their shared narrative.

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    6 comments · 2,312 views
  • 241 weeks
    Oops!

    Okay, I let the Discord Server invite expire. It should be working now at this link. It shouldn't expire this time.

    Sorry!

    -Derek (aka DoD)

    PS: Just over 1000 words into the next Asylum chapter. Had to kinda restart it again to make any progress.

    7 comments · 684 views
Sep
25th
2014

Asylum - Chapter 22 edits, and Rex Ivan responds to my ALS Ice Bucket Challenge! · 4:22am Sep 25th, 2014

If you don't know who Rex Ivan is, he's my main editor on Asylum and the sole reason why it's readable at all. Go here and say hi to the shy man! He might be a drunk veteran, but he's my drunk veteran, dammit.

Anyway, I've been getting over a bit of sickness, but I was able to - with Rex's help - go in and edit Chapter 22 to change a few things around. Hopefully it should have improved the final product.

And yes, that does mean that I do go back and edit stuff even months after it's written.

-Derek (aka DoD)

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Comments ( 3 )

I am curious as to progress on the next chapter...
And I am definitely gonna check out your friend. As a fellow Veteran, I shall lend him my support :twilightsmile:

I edit things all the time. Most great writers wish they could make one last edit to their story before it's published. Fortunately on here, you have that opportunity. Waiting patiently but with baited breath for the next update. Good luck to you both.:rainbowdetermined2:

I don't blame any veteran for being drunk, given the shit they put up with.

Also, editing is awesome, and so is having an awesome editor.

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