LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!
Part one of my first ever Dan Vs. fic, "Dan Vs. The Affair", is available for reading on my website!
Click here to read the story.
For right now, I'm giving it a 14+ (Teen) rating, but if I decide to make it a little spicier later, I'll up it to an 18+ (Mature) rating.
Hope you enjoy it! Be sure to let me know what you think.
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Damn...
I like how you capture the personalities of the characters, and Chris is so clueless.
I'm looking forward to reading more of this!
Keep posting. I'm, as they say, intrigued.
Also, spotted what I think is a small spelling error.
Shouldn't that be an "s" instead of a "z"?
Wait, I'm lost. How did they end up 'doing it' the first time? It seems like they kind of jumped from 'Dan is comforting Elise(somehow)' to 'Dan is banging Elise'.
2428537 No idea how that happened.
Fixed, thanks!
2428701 The cutaway makes it pretty obvious how they ended up having sex. I didn't want to write what actually happened there, feeling it best left to the imagination.
2428808 Not then. I understand that part perfectly. I mean the FIRST time, as in, the night before. When Chris was all angry and stuff.
2428866 That's...exactly what I'm talking about. At this point they've only done it once.
2428874 ...
Okay, in my defense, it's late at night, I'm running purely off of my love of ponies right now, and I've been trying to come up with my own custom archetype for Yugioh all day, so that's been clouding my thoughts.
2428877 Happens to all of us.
Well this is escalating quickly!
Interesting take on Chris being a lousy lover. The show hints maybe once that Elise and Chris don't have the best bedroom life and it's interesting to see that added to the heap of problems the show makes clear these two have.
Chris having issues with kids has come up a few times in the show, where's Dan seems oddly comfortable with the idea of having a family. So that's probably not going to help the marital strife...
Looking forward to seeing more.
2430997 Yeah, everything seems to add up to Chris being lousy in bed and probably sterile (at least, that's how I interpret him). At the very least, he's so G-rated it's sad, and Elise is obviously a girl who craves PG-13.
I'm planning to have a mini-gag in the next part where Dan does his Skyward Scream because he can't get a condom wrapper open.
Just read it again and I got to say I never get tired of it, but I do wish to find out what happens next
I hate ntr/cucks but I love this story. This is literally the ONLY DanxElsie fic I have ever seen... And you never finished it D:
*prays for the day it gets updated and an 18+ scene of the first time*