The best story you've never read. · 12:57am Aug 25th, 2014
The best story you've never read, mostly because it just came out.
The three tribes never became one, leaving a cluster of territories instead of one single nation. Many years later, a great ruler of one of these territories decided that all ponies should be part of one great nation known as Equestria, and should never again have to live in fear of the monsters that lived around and among them. And that is why Twilight Sparkle of the Knights of the Silver Sunrise, Princess Celestia's most efficient military apparatus, has come to the captured city of Hessaneigh.
This story is about Twilight and, to overly generalize, unifying the three tribes and exiling the changelings from Equestrian land... but it's so much more. If you've ever wanted to read a fan fiction with some actual depth to it, this is your story. If you want another Twi-Dash-Self-Insert-OC shipfic, then you're in the wrong neighborhood.
It's a haunting alternate reality of what could have happened if the Wendilol's hadn't united the tribes and if Celestia would go to any lengths to protect her ponies. Also, it's awesome. What more do I have to say about it? If you don't believe me, read it wise guy.
So for the rest of the night I'll either be playing video games or writing... I haven't decided yet. It's hard to get back into writing the longer you go without writing.
My problem exactly.
It may turn out good but i just don't like the idea of Twilight as some nazi leader trying to readicate the changelings as is framed out in chapter one. WAY too much emphasis on putting a dark WWII era past on an Equestrian world for my taste. Sorry