Chapter 1 of "Sunset's Last Glow" · 6:30pm Aug 16th, 2014
New readers:
My apologies for Chapter 1 being unpublished right now. I have looked at the story as a whole and found that there are significant parts of it that need to be rewritten. I've revised the Chapter, but now I need a pre-reader to go through the revisions and give their opinion before I post it again. Also, part of Chapter 2 will need a revamp, but it won't significantly affect the remaining chapters.
Thanks for your patience!