Pre-pre-readers? · 4:58am Aug 13th, 2014
Once again I'm looking for some pre-pre-readers to gather some... market research, yeah, that's it. I want to see if a story idea has legs and is worth following through on. So I've got 5k of words that could use some eyeballs and feedback. Any volunteers? I'll set the first few respondents up with a private GDocs copy of The Story So Far where they can make comments to their heart's content. No need to monitor grammar—I have my master editor, Spabble, to handle that later. I'm just looking for story feedback. :)
Title: Tempus Futile
Synopsis: Given the opportunity to explore future events by a new spell of Star Swirl the Bearded’s, Princess Celestia comes face-to-face with what it truly means to have a destiny.
Tags: unsure as yet
Characters: Celestia, Star Swirl the Bearded
Setting: Ancient Equestria
Percent Complete: 50% (2 of 4 expected chapters) 5300 words
What's it about? Still looking for help?
2366464 I should post the synopsis here. :) I did post an early version of it elsewhere. I'll edit the blog entry to add the synopsis.
2366678 Certainly sounds interesting. I'd give it a go.
Interesting idea. Only seen a couple other stories that deal with the past/future without it immediately getting all gloomy in one or the other. I'd like to read it as well.
2366776 I was hoping you'd be interested, VT. I'll set you up the bomb and send you a link in email. :)
You know you always have me as a prereader
2373096 Excellent, and of course! I'll email you a link. :)