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Aug
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2014

Choose My Next One Shot · 11:40am Aug 10th, 2014

Greetings my fellow bronies from around the world. Well, while I'm working on collabs, trying to finish some fics, and being busy in looking for a job, I've decided to try my hands on another one shot. I have a few ideas, but I don't know which one to go with, so I'm going to leave this hear for a few days and await responses. Enjoy

1. Title: “The Greater Good”
Summary: “Celestia had sent Twilight Sparkle the book because she knew it as time. It was time for Twilight to achieve the destiny that Celestia had prepared her for ever since they first met years ago. She had been through trial after trial and managed to come up on top each time. Celestia was more proud of Twilight then she had been with any other student.
The report from Spike soon comes near the end of the day. Twilight cast the spell, the Elements shined on her… and Twilight Sparkle died.
Just as Celestia had planned. “

2. Title: “Never Forget Me”
Summary: "It had been a year since Twilight had heard of anything from Trixie since the Alicorn Amulet incident. Unexpectedly, she receives a letter saying that her so called "rival" has tragically died and is requested to be at her funeral. Going alone, Twilight finds out that she is the only one there. Or is she?"

3. Title: “Surrender”
Summary: “After five years of warfare, Equestria, once the most powerful nation in the world, has surrendered to the Human Republic, not only more advance in magic, but also technology as well. With no other options, Celestia has signed the surrender papers and now must deal with the hardest task of all. Telling the rest of her people they are Equestrians no more.”

4. Title: “Proving Them Wrong”
Summary: “Lucas never expected to be given a warm welcome in Equestria. He was an alien after all, and Celestia wasn’t exactly a fan of his kind. Even most of Ponyville from the Elements themselves to the foals feared him. He knew they had been waiting to see some kind of violent response, some kind of necessary action that would prove all their fears and hatred of him true. But he knows he’s not evil and he knows there are those that stand with him. So to end this once and for all, to prove them wrong, he asks for the ultimate test:
Hitting him with the Elements of Harmony.”

5. Title: “You Know Nothing Of Magic”
Summary: “It came out of nowhere. It was more powerful than anything they had seen. It swept the princesses away like they were nothing. Fire. Lightning. Ice. Earth. All of it he could wield with but a simple wave of its hand. No army could stop it. No hero could stop it. And as soon as he came. He left. But left a single message in his wake…”

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Comments ( 34 )

"Never forget me" has my vote. Just sounds like the more interesting one.

"Never Forget Me".

Proving them wrong

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I agree. I feel like I've read The Greater Good before, honestly.

"Never Forget Me"

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"Proving Them Wrong" would be the only other one of these that I would actually read. A different HiE story than you usually see. Still, Never Forget Me sounds interesting. Especially because I have an idea that Trixie just faked her own death to meet Sparkles.

Never Forget Me.

“Proving Them Wrong”

Proving them wrong seems the most interesting to me.

If dis story be avatar crossover, then choose “You Know Nothing Of Magic”

Greater Good

I need to know her motivation for twilights death.

I'm gonna give my thoughts, as well as my answer.

1. It feels as if that did happen in the canonical show. :derpytongue2:
2. You already have "Why Am I Crying?" Why would you wanna write this one?
3. Meh
4. I was never interested in HiE stories, but this is pretty good.
5. A hundred years passed and my brother and I discovered the new messenger: a writer named Rated Ponystar! :rainbowwild:

So yeah! Proving Them Wrong and You Know Nothing Of Magic are the more interesting ones! My choice is Proving Them Wrong. I recently made it a mission to establish and develop a Human in Equestria lore in the fandom, as Proving Them Wrong might just give me the spark. It's a selfish choice, but an efficient one.

Never Forget Me

The unlucky adventures of a lucky horseshoe.

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Damnit man! Don't reveal my hidden fanfic that will utterly crush all fanfics before it!

Never forget me! The Trixie one!

Never forget me.

2358841 I was 100% serious.

SHL

"Never forget me. It's the only one who I see interesting.

Well, no. The first one also could have potential, but I have enough tragedy for now thanks to your last collab.

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Dude, I will never have enough tragedy. Not until I kill them all :pinkiecrazy:

SHL

2358918 Or until we kill you. Whatever comes first :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

4&5 especially 4!

ALL HAIL THE GREATEST WRITER IN HISTORY!!! :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:

Número cinco.

I choose Title 2: "Never Forget Me".

2 or 4, I think.

Mmm...

Number 2 has my vote.

The rest feel like they be longer than just one chapter.

~Skeeter The Lurker

The report from Spike soon comes near the end of the day. Twilight cast the spell, the Elements shined on her… and Twilight Sparkle died.
Just as Celestia had planned. “

Man, thats cold...

5

I some how missed this blog when it first went up, but cought the update blog, file my vote under “Proving Them Wrong”

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