I can't do that! · 4:26am Jul 22nd, 2014
After a while of thinking and the what not, I realize...what am I doing? I'm letting criticism and such get to me again. Every time I tried to encourage myself to move on, I end up being weakened somehow! If I give up sending stories here, then my friends would be disappointed. I can't do that to them. Plus, if I leave, I would miss out on the other cool stories that are here.
Well, guess what? I will be sending my stories here from now on. Sorry, Bwaak and anyone else who want me to improve. If I wish to improve my stories, I will do that on my own terms. Call me a lost clause but I don't care. As long as I still breath, I will keep on sending stories here.
Go ahead, criticize my stories when I send them. I dare ya! If anyone flames, they will be removed! Folks, I do my stories not because I wanted to make friends or win approval. I do them because I want to!
If I want to be a better writer, I will do that when I want to. So therefore, I am staying!
Never give up Ju! I know how it feels to have your work slammed! But I never gave up! Your work is fantastic, and I shall read almost everything you bring, I loved your work on DeviantArt, and I love it here! Believe it!
*amazingly long sigh*
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Screw this, I'm done.
Glad to see you're still wanting to write stories, Jus. As I said in your last blog, your stories are always entertaining and I like them.
2305783 While his work needs improvement, let him improve himself, and not you screaming in his face.
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Screaming? What screaming?
i clap to you my freind i wonder if you did get my messag. keep on bronying and haters can bucking hate for all i care
2305833 the one were you keep complaining about his writing and not his actuall stories
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Can't read them, confused as heck. Too many problems, too generic, mary sue OC, like watching some kind of bad soap opera on TV. Ridiculous plot and uncreative OCs.
Keep babbling, I dare ya. I'm not in a good mood today.
2305858 yea i couldnt tell because you keep screaming
2305861 Irrelevant statement is irrelevant. Let's stop this petty argument before Jussonic decides to step in and stop us himself. It's embarrassing.
PS. How the h*ll can you tell I'm screaming? I only typed in the words, not using my voice.
2305870 alright i wil stop besides i should be feeling good for jus and just leave you alone. sorry for the commotion Jus
Glad to here it. I wish you luck for the future.
I don't think there is anything else to say. If you don't want to make the effort, then don't, you aren't going to be forced to do anything if you don't want to. Just remember criticism can be harsh, but it's given out for a reason and if you continue to ignore it, then it will continue. The comment section isn't only just for your friends, it's also for everyone who has something else to say besides 'good work'.
I know I haven't been the most constructive when I criticize you, but I don't like to repeat myself. I also feel annoyed that you keep sidestepping the issue, so yeah, I do think you're a lost cause. I also feel that since you like to remind people that question your age that you're, in fact, an adult, that I really don't feel obliged to be nice when I critique your work in the future. It's MY opinion, I will do what I want.
Anyway, good luck, keep at it, and maybe in the future you will impress me.
Personally, I doubt it.
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Seconded. If anything, I'll just read, maybe fave and keep my mouth shut.
That's the spirit, pal!
My friend, keep writing, don't stop doing something you love just becasue people are hatting on you. Only take to heart constructive critism and improve at your own pace.
Good to hear!
2305858 if jus is really that bad, where are your 127 followers? 78 stories? More than 35000 views? And remember, you are longer at fimfiction.
2325318 Oh boy...
Those 127 followers are mostly from his already large fanbase from both Deviantart and Fanfiction.
He already making MLP fanfics long before he entered this site, that's why he has 84 stories. BECAUSE HE ALREADY MADE THE MAJORITY OF IT.
Me? I really don't care about those numbers. This whole fanfiction thing only satisfy my boredom. I write as a secondary hobby. There are other more important things to worry about than getting some attention in a fandom based on a popular kids' show.
Don't judge people just by seeing their followers/story views/story count. Peace out.
2325614 i know that. I was a little bit to fast with writing that.
Dancing cucumber... saus... bluuueeeeeh
Only think in what you want, your stories are very good, and if someone don't like it, it's their problem. I for example think a part sometimes is a little boring, but even so, I like your stories, so don't worry, you don't need to change, if you like to write, then do it.
Just because someone don't like it, you don't need to stop.
Like Iron Will could say "If you don't like, get out of here"
2325675 Mhmm, keep telling yourself that.
2429459 what? Dancing cucumber?
This is one of the worst attitudes towards criticism I've ever seen, yet the comments here are almost nothing but saying "That's the spirit!" and implying "Yeah, don't listen to criticism!"
Ugh,
2543609 That's Jussonic's fandom for ya.
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Finally! Some one who talks sense!