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Cherry Rie 310133

Joined July 2011
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    Cherry Rie's Stories (3)

    • First Draft
      What is there left to save, when you are more machine then human? A Conversion Bureau story.

      49,672 words · 1,156 views · 52 likes · 11 dislikes
    • All the King's Horses
      What is left to save, when you're more machine then Human?
      8,981 words · 198 views · 8 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Show me the way to go Home
      Four friends are trapped in their version of equestria.
      5,820 words · 278 views · 12 likes · 4 dislikes
    Jun
    6th
    2012

    Work and Madness · 1:22am

    Just an update and an apology to everyone, given I’m so very behind on the last chapter for AKH.  Having hoped to have it released two weeks ago, I've just not had the time to write with collage work mounting.  The end of year show is ten days away and frankly I feel less then prepared.

    Anywho, another important bit of info is that AKH is being sort-of wrapped up in the next chapter.  During the planning stages I realised early on that there were massive hitches going into the second half of the story.  

    A lot of perspective characters were phased out, while others found themselves randomly spotlighted by a much tighter storyline.  Eventually, after spending a lot of time thinking about convoluted ways of keeping the whole cast in play, I eventually settled on the fact that things would work far more smoothly if I focused the story in on the perspectives of only one or two.

    While I had planned on almost double the number of present chapters, the shift required at this point feels more like a whole other story as we move away from the core characters of the first.  

    In short, what was planned as a single tale has been divided into two; this first novella forming the precursor to a story with a much greater focus on two key characters, rather than wandering over such a wide cast.  This new project will become the new subject of my self-imposed rules, with weekly (if not better) updates though out the coming months.

    As For AKH itself, following the scrutiny and brilliant tips from followers of the original, it will be subjected to an overhaul going to become a pet project over the summer.  With any luck I’ll be able to rope in both supporters and critics to gage what needs changing and what could be expanded upon.  After being subjected to a large amount of editing I’ll resubmit the whole thing in a trimmed, sleek form.

    Hopefully the last chapter to AKH will be up in the next week or so!

    Thanks for listening!  

    Cherry

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    Comments ( 5 )

    #1 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    If nothing else, I'll happily help proof the piece.  My eye may not be the best for critical ammenments, but I can at least put a spell-check to shame.

    #2 · 50w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>157737

    Thankyou very much hun!  I'll definatly contact you once I've started to make the changes :twilightsmile:

    #3 · 38w, 2d ago · · ·
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    As always I'm late to the party. I take it this is why AKH has been marked as canceled?

    #4 · 38w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>317105

    Yup, although maybe I should post a cap-off chapter and just call it complete :derpyderp2:

    Sorry about that.  I got quite hung up on the fact that I wouldn’t be able to kill the shark I’d created,  I'll see about finishing that today though.  It doesn’t make much sense leaving it so abruptly, even if the ending has a lot of loose ends.

    Upto chapter three with the rewrite so far.  It's looking like there will be at least an additional two chapters along with the expansions to the existing ones.

    Once I'm far enough ahead I'll start a phased release of the final version.

    #5 · 38w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>317122 That might work better. Another TCB story did the same except it wasn't cancelled, the author just decided to switch projects without telling anyone. So he posted a concluding chapter that told what's going on after I pointed that out to him.

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