Curse form stories · 5:55am Jun 25th, 2014
So I been watch the amine Bleach for some time and thought about giving the mane six some curse. One for each other them. I only got two for now.
For Twilight, it the Changeling Curse. It appears after Queen Chrysalis trap Twilight in the some place as Cadence in Wedding at Canterlot Part 2. It lies asleep inside her, until her friends are in mortal danger. Taking the idea from Bleach, the right half of Twilight's face becomes a mask of a changeling and she goes insane and call forth a sword call Change-Ing. The curse take over when Twilight friends are in great dangers and she has no control over herself. When she meets other ponies that has been affected with the same curse, she learns that they have control it and can even take to the Changelings inside them. Twilight learns she has two inside her. One was an insane Changeling that was banish from the hive after going against their Queen. In fact, the second Changeling is that same queen and is the firs queen of the Changelings and is the most powerful one of all. After learning to master the form, Twilight use her Changeling powers to stop huge threats that the Elements can't handle.
This curse is taking right from Bleach and is put on Rainbow Dash. This is know as the Hollow Curse, Unlike Twilight's curse, Rainbow had this curse since she was born and it said that even 100 years, an pegasus with rainbow hair will be born will have this curse. Like from both Bleach and Twilight's curse, the curse will appear if her friends are in mortal danger or if Rainbow is close to death. Unlike Twilight's Curse, Rainbow curse doesn't mark who a friend or who a foe. Rainbow will also go insane and is the only curse to actually defeated Celestia and Luna. Rainbow is able to fight back and tear the mask off at any time when she does. I have not decide if Rainbow will learn to control this curse like Twilight or not. Like with Bleach, half of Rainbow face is cover with a hollow mask that looks like Ichigo's hollow mask before learning to control it. Here's picture that will help you guys know what I mean.
And here's Hollow Rainbow Dash theme,
I thought of Applejack curse a few days ago and her is different then Rainbow's and Twilight's curse. It call the Devil Arm curse. When Applejack was a filly, before she try to go live with her aunt and uncle, Applejack sneak out of the house by a strange light and follow it to the Everfree Forest. When she found it, she saw it was a huge hole. Looking in it, Applejack could see flames everywhere. Then a black and red arm shot out and grab her right hoof and try to drag her in. Applejack fought back and was able to see what had her. Applejack was almost pull in, but another arm, bigger then the one that had her, grab the creature that had her. It was pull down and Applejack hoof was release. By having her right hoof pull in the hole, it turn black with red glowing cracks that make the sound of a heartbeat, with a small horn on her shoulder. It turns back to normal and Applejack keeps it hidden from everyone. After getting her cutie mark, she trains with the new arm and soon master the ability to summon it. Unlike Rainbow and Twilight when they first get their curse, Applejack does not go insane and has control. But the curse is still able to try and and take over Applejack when she is knock out. This curse is still being work on.
I got something for Rarity, I give her the Dragon curse, Rarity get this curse some time after Spike come back after being with other dragons, those same dragon kidnap Rarity to get back at Spike, Rarity escapes and is chase, along the way some dragons catch up and try to grab but end up knocking Rarity around, hurting her doing so. She then falls into a new cave and breaks her back so bad that she near death. She is save by a another dragon that is bigger then the ones that kidnap her, and her know as the great Fire Breather because his fire breath can melt any thing. After getting the others dragon to leave, he decides on what to do with Rarity. His first guess was to eat her, but picking up a smell he knew, turns out this dragon is Spike's father! Seeing Rarity on the edge of death and his young son had friends, he give Rarity some dragon blood to heal her. Then he take Rarity back to Ponyville and warns her that she could be a danger if she get mad. Rarity awakes to think it was a dream and her curse starts. When Rarity get mad her eyes turn red and her teeth become sharp, she also speaks in dragon language that only Spike can understand, later her curse change her more by making her fur coat into scales and her mane and tail be come spikes. Like Applejack's curse I'm still thinking on it.
As for Fluttershy and Pinkie, I have not come up with curses for them yet. I don't want any of the normal curses we all hear. I'll give it some thought, but you guys are welcome to tell me. You need a name for the curse, what it does to the owner, how it looks, how it shows, like owner close to death or wanting to save her friends, and last, how they fight back to get in control if the curse makes them insane. Also any themes for their curse forms will be great as well.
2233030 That fine. What do you think about the curses I came up with Twilight and Rainbow Dash? Doesn't matter if you seen Bleach or not.
2233783 See the picture of Rainbow curse form?
2234413 The mask is from Bleach only the marks have been recolor, I can't find a one to match Twilight's curse but I have stated that it was a changeling like mask. I short of started Rainbow curse story on Fanfiction, but got draw away from it a few times. Just started on it too.
2234770 Don't know, have thought of it yet.
How much of the story have you finished?
2237705 Well, I haven't done any yet, but I have done Rainbow curse form on Fanfiction to help me plan ideas. I have thought of a Curse form for Applejack which I'm call it, Devil Arm. Once I get more plan out it will be added to the blog.
2237723 It sounds good can, t wait to read it!
2243393 I just need a curse for Fluttershy and Pinkie and I can try to get them out of the way.
2243400 Have you seen Bats!?
2243404 No, but I heard of it. But that follow under a Vampire. It what I can a every day curse. I want a curse that made up and never heard of before.
2243410 Discord curse for Fluttershy!
2243410 What episodes of season 4 Have you seen?
2243428 Well, I stated some of the thing on my blog and I'll tell you again, a name for the curse, what it does to the owner, how it looks, how it shows, like owner close to death or wanting to save her friends, and last, how they fight back to get in control if the curse makes them insane.
As for season 4 of MLP, I watch up to Power Ponies before moving away and then started watching different episodes from the season. The ones I remember the best as both Applejack's and Rainbow Dash's keys episodes and two of three of the CMC episode all of them starting one of each member. To this day, I have not watch any of the seasons fully.
2243428 Do you remember what happened to Fluttershy in Power Ponies?
2243450 Yes, but remember what else that's need.
2243455 Rage curse.
2243455 When will the next chapter of Pony Rangers be out?
2243463 You give me two things already, the name of the curse and what it does to the owner. Now I need to know how it shows, like owner close to death or wanting to save her friends, and last, how they fight back to get in control if the curse makes them insane.
The chapter is still in work, it going to be sometime before I can finish it.
2243472 Sorry can't think still sick.
How about this for Pinkie's curse?
Name: The Hurricane
How she got it: Eating an ancient artifact, the tantrum cupcake.
When it happens: When she eats a lot of sweets and is then disappointed about something.
What happens: She goes on a sugar rush and runs around destroying stuff and then crashes into a full-blown code red hurricane Katrina style temper tantrum. Flooding towns with her tears, turning ponies deaf with her screams.
Yeah, this is a weird one.
Oh right, and she looks like normal but brighter colored on sugar rush stage,
after she wakes up, and darker colored during tantrum. Oh yeah, and after the tantrum she falls asleep for a while and is sick for a day or two after.