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Blazewing


Just a regular guy who loves writing wholesome stuff. =)

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  • 32 weeks
    Update Time (for Affection Therapy, Tough Cookie and Syntax, and Living in Equestria)

    Hiya, folks. Hope you've all been doing well.

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  • 56 weeks
    Small Update

    Hiya, folks! I know it's been quiet for a while on my end, but rest assured, I have gotten a start on the next Affection Therapy chapter. I really appreciate the feedback I got when I asked for advice in the last chapter, and it's given me a good idea of how I want to proceed, so long as I can make it work properly without feeling like I'm rushing or skipping over things. I'm just trying to be

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  • 100 weeks
    An Announcement

    Hey, folks. I wanted to get this out here in advance and give you all a head’s up.

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  • 104 weeks
    Update Time, and Thoughts on L.i.E.

    Hey, everybody. I've got a couple things I want to talk about.

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  • 146 weeks
    Next Affection Therapy Chapter

    Hey, everybody. I'm still contemplating how I want to proceed with the next Affection Therapy chapter. I've been working on other projects, so MLP stories have kinda been on the backburner, though I want to return to it hopefully soon.

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Apr
10th
2014

A True True Friend? Suggestions · 5:17pm Apr 10th, 2014

I wanna thank all of you who favorited and liked A True True Friend?, but after seeing some comments, I realize there's much more I could do with it, one-shot though it is. It's true that the rock candy necklaces, even if they are a sign of true friendship, isn't enough to quell all the pain Spike's gone through, even if Twilight said it was only a start. That's why I want to put it to you to suggest what I could add. Suggestions from the Main 6 to Spike for how they intend to make it up to him, like Pinkie baking a jewel cake with him or something. Things you think could give more reason for Spike to forgive them in a more natural way.

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Comments ( 5 )

I still need to read your story. :raritycry:
Why must my life be busy at THIS moment?!?!?!?!

I say it's great as is. The story was touching and got the point across, that while, Spike may be neglected sometime or a lot, that he is still loved and they will try harder to prove that to him.

I don't recommend changing anything. But if you feel like you need to write more, might I suggest an "Epilogue".

Spike, writing a letter to, Princess Luna, about how things have been going since, Spike and the Mane 6, had their talk.

Would be a good Friendship report that would go to, Celestia, but will be given to, Luna and read out loud so her sister can hear what's been happening with Spike. You know, because we have no idea how much they really talk to each other! But I would say a lot more than the show would say.:moustache::trollestia:

So yeah. Epilogue this story! Can't go wrong there.:twilightsmile:

1997561 Sounds great! I'm just clean the original up to reflect that, then make the epilogue, and we should be good to go

Fluttershy and Spike going in a nature trail.

Rainbow Dash and Spike going flying.

AJ asking for Spike's assistance in the farm.

Things like that.

I know it's a bit late here's a few suggestions...just in case:

Twilight confronts Cadence about not inviting Spike to the Crystal Empire, feeling guilty Cadence decides to make up to Spike by inviting to go with her on a trip (which quickly turns into a mini adventure) to find a birthday present for Shining Armor.

While taking Spike to visit Peewee, both Fluttershy and Spike come across some poachers and try to fend them off.

Twilight takes Spike on a camping trip with Shining Armor and the three form an even deeper bond.

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