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JusSonic


Hey folks. JusSonic here, finally sending fics here. While I was worried about coming here for some time now, I decided to give this place a shot...as long as you be fair, 'kay?

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  • 430 weeks
    The Remake is done!

    For those who wants to see the adaptation version of "The Cutie Re-Mark" can find it under my name at deviantART, or right here at Archive of Our Own: http://archiveofourown.org/works/5502896/chapters/12710723

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Apr
7th
2014

Taking some time off for a while · 1:01am Apr 7th, 2014

Due to the fact that my recent story 'Brave Heart's Visit' that I put up here is getting a lot of thumbs down, criticism, and the fact that some folks aren't a bit happy with my attitude lately, I have deleted it...for now. And I am taking some time off from posting stories here (Total Drama Equestria is the only exception of course) for a while until I can at least find an editor for my fics.

Friends and fans, I know you want me to continue my stories but I need to get away from my problems right now, especially since I was called a 'sperglord' by someone that I blocked due to the same problem (BTW, World of Warcraft isn't my forte).

I may begin putting up fics in the near future when I can but until then, I am on hiatus...for now.

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Comments ( 13 )

Aww, that sucks. Yeah, you're writings needs work, but I may be up for being your editor.

1986979

Really? How so? Got any ideas on how to make that happen?

1986993 just PM me a chapter and I'll see what needs work. Love your work, or there's a group, Looking for Editors, try hitting them up.

1987040

Okay, just send ya a chapter. Wow, I wish I've known how to PM chapters to people (actually, I can PM folks but I didn't know how to get editors for this part).

What I am about to say about your fics should not be taken offensively. (I love your fics btw).:scootangel:
When I read a fic I grade it on three 1-10 scales,
Story/Plot
Characters
Grammar.
For an example, let's use Lorcan's Wrath.
Story: Great pacing, plot, and action with a few moments that i had to reread (can't name them of the top of my head) 9/10.:twilightsmile:
Characters: Every portrayal is great, OC's are awesome (LONG LIVE NYX!!!!), with a few expected OOC moments that are expected with an AU fic, 10/10.:rainbowkiss:
GRAMMAR: Notice that caps lock? Good.
Before I continue I am going to state an observation that I have made on this site since I joined last August:
If your prologue/1st chapter has bad grammar, it will usually get you an automatic thumbs-down.
Some people don't care about characters or story. If they see bad grammar, the won't read a single word of your story.
Looking at your stories, you have a good amount of likes/dislikes for a new guy on the site (hell, none of my fics have even 30 likes...:raritycry:). But what kills your oppurtunity to be a member of that group of really popular writers is your grammar.
To put it bluntly, if u asked a editor to solely edit your grammar, it would be like asking a brain surgeon to put a band-aid on a scratched knee, 2/10.
If you average the scores Lorcan's Wrath gets a 7/10. It's still great, but the grammar holds it back from scoring any higher.:fluttercry:
I posted this comment so that you can see what you need the most work in.
If you haven't figured it out yet then you are on your own.

1987431

I already figured out the whole editing thing (at long last! Ugh, why didn't I figure that out a 'long time ago'?! :facehoof:) So hopefully things will calm down in the meantime.

1987448

:twilightsmile: People make mistakes. But we learned from it. Once we do, we moved on and make a better one. Lots of people make mistakes. And even S.O.B. Hamster is. He learned nothing. He simply judged people's work, like mine if check it out, without even talking with me. When I had explained properly, he just insult with no reason but his own. :twilightangry2: He is suck a dick. Extremely dick, if you, I and the folks had to say. Worse than Solfire or Slowsaurus if you had to tell. He's full of selfishness and dick. :facehoof:

But... meh. I actually enjoyed Brave Heart's Visit.

1991188

No worries. When my break is over, I will begin submitting the story again.

1991270 Sorry, but the rules can't let you do that.

Don't Post: The same story twice.

You could get banned for it.

1997661

I think it means don't post the story more than one. I already deleted it and plan on reposting it.

1997720
Ooh, rules can't let you that, either:

Don't post: Rewrites of an old story posted as a new story. You are free to edit your existing story, but you may not post it as a new submission.

1999122

Well, luckily I was told there's a possibility that my old story can be undeleted (send a PM earlier) so hopefully it will be back up soon.

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