Fantasia Archsage Reviews "Lunar Limbo" · 7:32pm Apr 6th, 2014
“Lunar Limbo”
Written by Pump It Up
Reviewed by Fantasia Archsage
Hello all everyone, I’m putting out another short and interesting one shot for you guys to read. Hi, this is the Fantasia Archsage Review or “FAR” series with your host, me, Fantasia Archsage. And right now I’m bring another story to you “Lunar Limbo”.
To be honest, when I saw the name I was actually expecting it to be a comedy one shot but found out otherwise when I found out the fic was sad and dark.
Okay, so the description was actually great and it actually had me interested as into what her “negative emotions” were telling her and if she won that battle over them. My curiosity as a reader swallowed me inside the story, and I began reading.
So right away, I was like getting all the feelings of how Luna felt but I didn’t get the scenery in my head right away. I thought about what the author did there for a bit and thought that was a really unique way to start a story. I’ve read stories that started out with NOT telling me where in the world is the story taking place, but in this case she didn’t reveal it right away until you read a little inside which I would be about a paragraph and a half or so in. I thought it to be pretty interesting.
So I was like, alright interesting title, nice description, and interesting start for a story? Why not keep on reading this mighty interesting, eh? And I read on.
The conversation done with Luna and her “negative emotions” throughout the story was written well I must say. All I’m gonna say it was quite the conversation and you all should take my word and give it a read.
What I like about it is that the story took place before the return of nightmare moon which I find to be again another interesting one shot story. I also won’t say anything about the end and keep that as a surprise like I’ve always been doing.
Anyhow, I think I said enough about this one for the evening. Thank you all for reading, this is the Fantasia Archsage Review or “FAR” series. I have reviewed the story “Lunar Limbo” which was written by Pump It Up and reviewed by Fantasia Archsage, your host. Hope you enjoyed this maybe two minute read and hope to make it a little longer with future ones to come.
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how do you decide what you gonna review?
also, might I suggest adding the fic's image up top with the title? may as well link the title up top too
1986233 You know I was thinking of that, but then I thought readers would go into the link instead reading the story which is why I linked it below with the link to the users account as well :P But hey, I could start doing that if you guys want that. :3
1986226 I just add it to my readers list and eat away, reading the fics and writing the review. If you're story is long, then I might hold it off for a set day when I have enough time to read and fully understand the story on a whole. :P
1986238 then lust show the fic image. leave the links where they are
1986240 what about something you've already read, but before you'd started reviews...
1986241 Hmm, I wonder how to do that :P
1986243 Then I read it again, which would be a little faster to do since I've read it already and write the review. :3
1986244 right click the image, select 'copy image location', then start your blog. when you want the image, click the button for it, then paste the url. bish bash bosh
1986246 couldn't.. maybe... review one of mine, could ya? maybe that one you like
1986253 Hmm... don't think I get it. And okay I will :3 Are you gonna take a look at the chapter? If not now, maybe this weekend?