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Mar
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2014

Need changeling hives · 2:19pm Mar 15th, 2014

I'm going to make a one-shot with Samaru (when he gets better) that will have them losing their experimental changeling hives. Those who read Sweat and Iron know what I'm talking about. And before you ask, yes. The very first person they mutated at the beginning will escape (except she's become completely demented and psychotic as a result). And no, they won't be in the Equestria "they" entered.

Now, your queens and hives must be unique. They could have been pony or human of one of the two genders. And you can ONLY create one. We all remember what happened when I tried to show the creations of everyone else with what became a semi-sequel to "The True Psychopath" (I'm still going to use those characters, but will still put who belongs to who in the author's notes if I ever figure out a proper sequel). And yes, your hives can have a few unique forms of changelings. The prototype's is those weird little mutant changeling balls that took care of their queen's eggs and extremely bulky tank-lings.

I am going to make a story about them in the future detailing the impact these mutations are causing in the world and to the natural changeling hives, after I finish my current stories.

Don't forget that these are mutations forcefully created from captured "Test Subjects", as mentioned previously by what the queen possibly was in the past. The serum used to mutate them also mentally changes the subject and forces a new name to overlap their previous one, and also gives them a new mindset, but they still remember everything.

Hive name:
Queen name:
Queen appearance:
Hive appearance:
Hive specialty:
Pre-Queen details:
Current mindset:

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Comments ( 38 )
Aru

Hmm interesting ideas. I don't have any idea for a hive but for..well. Kinda speciality of changelings. Seems like they have quite a skill in mutating things so.... why not make a whole cast or something of "Fleshcarvers"? Simply put. This fellas would be in charge or creating(some biomass or something) organic weaponry and siege machines. Manticore-like big beetle-like buggy thingie with ability to fly and chityne carapace strong enough to withstand most of melee weaponry simply braking swords and so on on it's armor.

1927499 Each changeling mutation was made to appeal to one specific aspect. As the prototype was just to test the serum, she has no specialty. However, there is one made to manipulate, another made for pure frontline combat, and so forth. The hives don't work together.

I...I don't know how to do this.

1927750 First you type on the keyboard, then you type in details for a hive, and tada! :trollestia:

Why is everyone doing things with changelings now? I'm waiting for a moment to be original and its slowly disappearing.

1928572 ...I planned this the moment I made "Sweat and Iron". It's only now I've become impatient. I wanted to show the inner devisings of them.

1928587 it isn't just you. I've just noticed a lot of people posting things about doing stories about changelings soon and its weird because there was almost a lull in stories about them for a while.
Sorry if it sounded like I was blaming you or something for posting now. I didn't mean it like that.

1928646 I got what you meant. It's just that it sounded like you were accusing me of doing like everyone else.:applejackunsure: Besides, imagine how it'll turnout. Each one of these were forcefully mutated, without any painillers or anything of the sort, and many of them have broken minds with the Prototype's being the most destroyed of all.:pinkiecrazy: Some of those 'lings might try to get back to their own kind.:rainbowkiss:

BREEZIES!

1928651 That wasn't my plan. Just get back in your padded room and watch the breezes flit about. Enjoy your happy place.

1927784 But...but what does it even mean? ...I can't create 'Hives'...That's too many characters.

1929549 Characters? You need only create a queen and give a special caracteristic to the queen as well as their special colors and probably a special TYPE of changeling. The only character you need to make is the queen herself.

Hive name: Maleficarum
Queen name: Maleficia
Queen appearance: Black carapace, tail, wings and mane are violet near the base and gradually changes to sickly neon blue at the ends. Her crown is also neon blue. Her eyes have black sclera and dark-blue iris with vertical slits.
Changelings appearance: Black carapace, dark-grey eyes with random coloration near the center. Manes, wings and tails usually have deep, almost black color in red-violet-blue range. Those who have reddish coloration are usually females, while blueish are males and violets can be either. Individual changelings vary in size and build, but thin, tall build is the most usual.
Hive specialty: This hive is very odd. Maleficarum are perfectly equipped to seed fear, despair, distrust, hatred and war, because they can easily read weak spots of others and have inborn talent to inspire negative emotions and hostility in addition to natural shapeshifting. However, they can only feed on positive emotions, preferably joy and happiness They cannot inspire positive emotions directly, neither they have delicate mind control. In addition, they have very precise and yet fast telekinesis, and capable of multitasking with it, so they usually fight using fast-launched darts.
Pre-Queen details: Em, what kind of detail do you wish?
Current mindset: They are not directly hostile to anybody, but having only evil as their main weapon, they have hard time to integrate anywhere. They try to integrate into entertainment industry and to some extent into security business. Unable to inspire good impression directly, they can and prefer to avoid painful topics, leaving gentle neutrality impression. However, behind that, they do not trust anybody outside the Hive, even if pretend otherwise and even if are actually attached to somebody they still won't trust.

1930508 Ooo. The name is a bit shabby but the rest is great! Also, for your question:

They could have been pony or human of one of the two genders.

These hives are mutations forcefully created from captured "Test Subjects". That's what I mean. What was the queen prior to this?

1930629
I see. Well, she was born as human female, graduated with above-average grades, got psychological and teaching education, and worked as a school teacher (natural sciences) and school-psychologist part-timer. She was singular, about 28-32 years old. She had active sex life, but didn't find anybody she was ready to share life with (though she did have several candidates and expected to make a choice in 2-5 years). She was not very fond of children or people in general, but was gentle and accurate and had many connections because of it. She was very ambitious and tried to make her students into something outstanding and even was successful in it sometimes.

1930706 I just got an idea. What if you described what happened when she was kidnapped and experimented upon to get the changeling morphing potion? You don't have to. It's just a thought that popped up. Otherwise it's good to me. Thanks!

1930721
I'm not familiar with the setting yet. Once I'll read it, I'll think about it.

1930742 Actually, it's only "them" that you really need to know about. They're a secretive but powerful scientific society with high technology that would experiment on creating biological creatures. Nobody really knows why. They used humans as test subjects and forced them to mutate into creatures they needed without putting these ones under medication and would write down the results. As the only needed result was stable transformayion, they didn't care if the person changed gender in the process. If the experiment failed, the dna was extracted and cloned to provide further analsis and perfection, and the failure was dumped into the chute. One of my one-shots showed them trying to create alicorns using Luna and Celestia's dna. There were unique variants such as a Celestia/Chrysalis hybrid obtained after the changeling invasion of Canterlot. She was..."disposed of" while still alive.

1930402 But special characteristic aren't easy? What would I make, a Changeling Hive centered around making food? Feeding on variety? Gold and Orange colors? Able to cook and eat real food if prepared exceedingly well? Queen named John? IS THAT GOOD ENOUGH FOR YOU?

1930886 :ajbemused: I didn't give details what the mutation serum did.:facehoof: I'll add it, but the serum mentally adjusts the queen and gives her a new name as well as a new mindset, but they retain past memories.

1930898 Queen name: John. Clone name: Mark. Current Mentality: Not giving a fuck. Ponies are mildly attractive though. So feed regularly. Previous Memories: None. Previous Mentality: HATE EVERYTHING!!!

....Trying to make them the Healthiest changelings, having no problem adjusting to other societies.

1930919 SOUNDS LIKE A PLAN. P!

Hive Name: Da Hive
Queen Name: Goldy Locks
Queen Appearance: My Avatar
Hive Appearance: Full of holes and EVIL
Hive Specialty: Having to much love
Current Mindset: Be Assholes to everybody!

Dere you go :ajsmug:

1935372 tis gud isn't it :derpytongue2:

1938243 I meant seriously. And no, I'm not complaining about the joke.

1938353 I was kinda serious lol, I honestly can't come up with creative stuff very well, I could have named the hive Mongolia or something, but it felt weird

1939260 Oh...Okay. Need help creating things?

1939292 I'm decent at creating ideas for stories and stuff, but I don't like getting into the technicalities because I'm awful at creating rules for stuff lol

1939317 Rules? What are these 'rules' thou speaketh of?

1939426 Like let's say I create a Hive, wouldn't I have to come up with ethics and rules to create a working society? With Ponyville those rules already exist.

1939650 The ones here? We don't care about those. These hives weren't created for a standing society. The prototype actually doesn't have one. At best, it's "survival", but that's it. The only thing you need is to set what purpose was given to the hive's genomes when 'they' created it, and all the little cosmetic facts I already wrote as well.

Hive name:
The Psychos
Queen name:
Psychopath
Queen (King) appearance:
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Hive appearance:
Blue and Pink swirling constantly
Hive specialty:
Mental Trauma
Pre-Queen details:
No previous Queens as it is a new original hive
Current mindset:
Mentally deranged
Extra notes:
All of the included creatures in the hive are The Psychopath (4000 Psychopaths :D)
:rainbowlaugh:

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