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  • 17 weeks
    Merry Christmas, all!

    My track record with Christmas releases is no longer perfect, but I do try! Only one 5k chapter of Sharing the Nation this year, though I'm hoping to have 5k more out before the new year. To make up for it, though, I've also brought out the Harry Potter crossover that's been languishing in

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  • 121 weeks
    Nothing this year, sorry

    Man, this has been… a year. Shortly after my last blog post, I had some (non-covid) medical issues that somewhat took over my life for a while, and while that's all in the past now, I'm only back where I was beforehand—completely unproductive. I was determined to get back into things at NaNoWriMo, but work steamrolled those plans and I just haven't been able to find the words to write something

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  • 161 weeks
    More burned out than I thought

    Jeeze, it's been four months since I decided not to force myself to generate updates for the sake of Patreon and gave myself the freedom to write whatever I wanted… but I haven't really written anything. I've done a thousand words or so here and there to play around with other fandoms, but nothing of significance.

    Shocking, I know.

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  • 174 weeks
    Tis the season for status updates. Not as much the other kind of updates as I would like, though

    It wouldn't be Christmas if I hadn't been completely incommunicado for at least a month or two beforehand, right?

    Unfortunately, I don't have chapters of Sharing the Nation to post for Christmas this year. I do have some Equal Opportunity Ascension chapters that only Patreon has seen, and I'll post those, I guess, but it's clear this… isn't working.

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  • 226 weeks
    Christmas Updates!

    Merry Christmas!

    As I've done every year since I started writing, I have updates here for you on Christmas day.

    ( It might look like there's a missing one, but the chapter for Sharing the Night that year was taken down and reposted)

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Feb
16th
2014

The concept of a concept · 11:08am Feb 16th, 2014

It has long been an adage that one should not judge a book by its cover. The basis of this statement is obvious, because the two are completely different artistic mediums. Often, though, the adage is applied to other things; people, jobs and what have you. Personally, I've always kept in mind one usage much closer to the original: that you should not judge a book by its concept. It's one of my most often stated opinions that any concept can be written well. I wholeheartedly believe this is true.

The thing is... we do. We judge books by their covers all the time, and we do the same with concepts. This, I've always felt, is the purpose of a concept. To draw initial interest in the same way a cover does, so that your writing has a chance to even be seen and judged by its merits.

I may have been too quick to judge the value of a good concept, however.

As I mentioned previously, Chapter 11 of Sharing the Night has been coming slow. As a result, I've had a chance to do quite a lot of reading recently. Tonight, I read The Retribution of Chrysalis and its sequel, The Redemption of Chrysalis. A good seventy-five thousand words which I largely enjoyed.

After I turned the final page of the .epub on my tablet and went on to like and favorite the second story, however, I stopped to think. These were what I would call well-written stories. While they had their issues, they succeeded in what I would normally call the most important aspect—they made me care. It was sad indeed, then, when I realized, that these stories which had gotten me short of breath and misty-eyed, were somehow also stories that I would soon forget.

It's a very strange feeling to realize that a story you've gotten so invested in simply doesn't have anything to make it stand out. To realize that this will effect how you remember it (or don't) in the future. To realize that perhaps the job of grabbing the reader's attention is important not only before a story is read, but after as well.

Memorable concepts can be a shortcut to the memories they represent.

I've never really thought about what makes a story leave a lasting impression.

Maybe I should.

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Does a story needs to make a lasting impression? If you had fun reading it the story fulfilled ist purpose.

It's an interesting thought. A story is -- if you're up for some hardcore abstraction, that is -- the execution of a concept, really. And if the concept doesn't grip readers by the balls it's pretty hard to write something really remarkable, even if the writing itself is technically flawless. And then, in turn, you've got to make the most of your idea otherwise it's just a squandered opportunity that would have been better off with someone else.

I think that making a lasting impression after the story ends is probably a very difficult thing to do. I know that relatively few books have done that to me. I could probably name most of them off the top of my head, if needs be. But with each of the ones that really resonated with me they all ultimately had that initial grab courtesy of a compelling underlying idea and the execution to sustain my interest.

I think the elements of what creates a lasting impression differ from reader to reader. As an author, I think you should be more concerned with whether or not you're fully realizing your vision and writing what you want to write than lining up specific little elements to make it perfect for one type of reader or another. And besides, I've read a lot of stories that I didn't think much of at the time, but then found myself reminiscing fondly about five or ten years later.

An interesting idea. Well, if it helps you've apparently unintentionally succeeded in creating memorable concepts with Sharing a Night, since things like Twilight having to eat her way out of a giant star bear and the moon and stars cradling each other leading to their physical incarnations doing the same stick with the reader. As evidenced by me going through all your blog posts hoping for update hints and finding April fools trolling instead (and a survey).

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